Passenger and Pilot

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//Poet's Note: This poem is a meditation upon my favorite Scripture - 
Hebrews 12:1-2 "Let us throw off everything that hinders, and the
sin that so easily entangles... and let us fix our eyes on Jesus"//

O, would that my affections were for Jesus,
and him alone – that heaven was my treasure.
That I would flee the bonds from which he frees us
and fix my eyes on Christ, not earthly pleasure.

A passenger and pilot on a plane 
have two distinct objectives on their mind:
one seeks to rest, or eat, or entertain
himself, or chat with others so inclined.
The pilot is all business – focused, taut,
scanning the skies and instruments at hand,
evading all distractions as one ought;
all to ensure the plane will safely land. 
   May I a pilot’s vigilance possess - 
   to seek God’s kingdom and his righteousness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 9/24/2020 4:43:00 PM
Oh, I really like this poem, John! I love your analogies and the spiritual implications on where our focus should be. Well done! :)
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John Watt
Date: 9/24/2020 6:27:00 PM
I'm so glad you saw this and liked it, my friend! Thank you for the encouragement.
Date: 6/7/2020 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations, John, on a well deserved placement. Your poem presents a well considered metaphor.
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John Watt
Date: 8/2/2020 9:32:00 PM
Thank you for the read and kind words, Lawrence.
Date: 6/7/2020 4:18:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this poetical prayer, anchored by great Scripture verses that propel us to keep our focus on the Lord. God bless you
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John Watt
Date: 8/2/2020 9:33:00 PM
Thank you dear Beata for your edifying remarks. God bless you ~ John
Date: 6/6/2020 3:07:00 PM
I knew this would place high on the winner's list John. This poem inspired me to start over and write the poem I entered. So thank you for the inspiration my friend. Congratulations on your worthy win! Blessings xxoo
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John Watt
Date: 6/6/2020 3:39:00 PM
Well, I just loved your winning write, Connie, so if I had anything to do with it, I'm extremely humbled. Thank you for your many kind words, I'm glad we can encourage one another towards a deeper faith in God through our words. Hugs ~ John
Date: 6/6/2020 1:38:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win for this thoughtful musing dear friend :)
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John Watt
Date: 6/6/2020 3:05:00 PM
Thank you for the second visit and the kind congrats, my friend. May your day be blessed ~ John
Date: 6/6/2020 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations John! You so beautifully merged the metaphors into a deeply moving prayer - one that all of us can relate to in our lives. Love this scripture and I can see it "written" all over your "score card."
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John Watt
Date: 6/6/2020 3:04:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. Gotta "keep your eye on the ball" as coach used to say! Appreciate you, and your friendly support, glad you enjoy this poem and the scripture behind it. It's been my "life verse" since I was 22. Blessings ~ John
Date: 6/6/2020 2:08:00 AM
it's good to be righteous. John, 2 in one. Sounds inviting, good luck in the contest. Linda
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John Watt
Date: 6/6/2020 3:25:00 AM
Thanks for the visit and the thought-provoking comment, Linda.
Date: 6/5/2020 6:18:00 PM
This is beautifully written sonnet, John. (sadly the kind of scripture I would never have chosen. Girls like me just wanna have fun) This deserves a WIN!
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John Watt
Date: 6/6/2020 1:28:00 AM
Getting a sonnet compliment from the queen of sonnets is like winning an Oscar to me! I would like to thank the Academy, my parents, my English teachers...
Date: 6/4/2020 1:38:00 PM
Your meditation brings out such a creative poem John. This is wonderful with the metaphor of a pilot and a passenger in an aircraft. I can relate with this so well because of my profession. A pilot always vigilant about safety would be so delighted if a passenger thinks about it too. I hope you find your path with the vigilance you possess. God bless you dear friend :)
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John Watt
Date: 6/6/2020 1:28:00 AM
Thank you very kindly, Aditi. Do you work in the field of air travel? I'm so glad you appreciated my metaphor. Many blessings ~ John
Date: 6/4/2020 2:26:00 AM
Your entry is beautiful John! I think I need to start over. I hope this does really well. Blessings xxoo
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/4/2020 5:57:00 PM
Actually that poem was about my spirit animal, but Rhonda gave me the scripture about the Eagle I added below Thank you John. xxoo
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John Watt
Date: 6/4/2020 11:00:00 AM
Thank you, dear Connie. I loved your Scripture poem about the soaring eagle. I hope your day is filled with beauty ~ John
Date: 6/3/2020 2:30:00 PM
Great write John, may we all be exhorted to give our all to our saviour. Great imagery and insightful thought too. Trust all is well with you, Blessings always ,Gordon
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John Watt
Date: 6/3/2020 10:50:00 PM
Thank you for your always supportive comments, brother Gordon. I hope you consider joining the contest for favourite Scripture. Hope you are doing well. ~ John
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