Passcendale

As we scrambled across the land
in the thick mud,
I put my boot through the rotting corpse of my brother.
Numbed with pain, my heart cried out at the obscenity
as we raced forward and struggled ahead.

The mud, the blood, the whining shells
And  the crashing boom of the great gun.

Now,  years after
I cannot remember that day’s  battle
but the feel of my foot
glancing against his  ribs
tears my memory.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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September 7, 2014 at 10:17 AM
Horrible image of war . Most touching. A few lines strongly suggest the obscenities and foolishness of war. Must read for everybody. A great war poem. Thanks Terry. Please more... RAJAT
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