Passages

17 passages of cars for the day 8:37 PM the farm fades dusk a quiet verse a poem song without words 12, 1, 20, 12 pick the numbers a game of fortunes clouds to the west chance of rain family living off the land a farmer’s pride a wary look to the sky after the spring planting a toss of the dice

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/26/2020 9:36:00 PM

A lovely muse Mike. Indeed a farmer would look warily at the sky after the spring plantation. Congratulations on your win. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2020 8:43:00 PM

glad to see this won, Mike. congratulations.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/17/2020 4:37:00 PM

A lovely entry Mike. Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo

Funom Makama

Date: 7/17/2020 6:02:00 AM

this is so amazing to ignore, despite missing out in the rules (no sponsor's name, no date of publication, no information about your most viewed poem used), you would have been placed higher. A well deserved placement.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2020 9:10:00 AM

This is very cool. A succinct and enjoyable read!