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Pass the Cheesecake - Guilty

I'm descending down a shame spiral Eating cheesecake for me has gone viral I'm guilty of no self control My doc says, "It'll cost me my soul" I swear on my word of honor I'm not ready to be a goner I'll walk past that grocery aisle At least for a little while. by Daniel Turner

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/22/2016 8:25:00 AM

Lol. It seems sweet things have a way of taking us to a doctor, no matter how hard we try to hide.... Congrats Daniel, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/22/2016 9:47:00 AM

Thank you, Teddy. Gotta have some vices! Peace my friend:)

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/22/2016 12:02:00 AM

Excellent Daniel! Congratulations on your win! Like the humor and can relate :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/22/2016 9:46:00 AM

:) Thank you, Susan for your kindness and for making me smile:) Peace my friend:)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/21/2016 7:47:00 AM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Daniel.

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/21/2016 8:22:00 AM

Thank you, Nayda. I appreciate your kindness. Peace young lady:)

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/20/2016 7:37:00 PM

Nice take on the theme, Daniel. Congratulations on your fine win! Sandra

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/21/2016 8:22:00 AM

Thank you, Ms. Sandra. I really appreciate your time and friendly comments. Peace dear lady:)

Lu Loo

Date: 3/20/2016 5:19:00 PM

DT, back with my congrats on your placement in the contest! Very clever :)-luloo

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/20/2016 5:28:00 PM

Thank you, Laura. I really appreciate your kindness. Haven't been reading a lot lately, a little under the weather. I'll come around in a few days to read. I'm not being an jerk. just not feeling well. Take care. Peace my friend:)

Lin Lane

Date: 3/20/2016 4:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement, Danny. I'm not a fan of cheesecake... just give me anything chocolate.

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/20/2016 5:02:00 PM

Thank you for letting me play along. I appreciate the opportunity to compete and I appreciate your recognition. Thank you My friend:)

Jeannie Cronin

Date: 2/22/2016 1:49:00 PM

How funny, that's my favorite dessert!

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/22/2016 1:52:00 PM

Oh I'm such a bad boy. I am so addicted. Thank you for stopping by and sharing, looks like we have a lot in common. Peace to you my dear for making my heart smile today:)

Tim Smith

Date: 2/22/2016 7:08:00 AM

Temptation is ever present.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/22/2016 9:16:00 AM

Thanks, Tim. You should know by now, I prefer humor. She said keep it short. I really appreciate the support you give me, Tim. It means so much to me. Not only are you a fantastic poet, you are an extremely nice young man. Thanks

Lu Loo

Date: 2/21/2016 8:39:00 PM

aha! This is great! I'm still trying to decide what guilty pleasure I have! There are so many!!! Good luck in the contest! :)-luloo

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/21/2016 8:49:00 PM

Thanks,Laura. It was a tough choice for me, I have so many. I appreciate the visit and the comments. I'm glad I made you smile. Peace dear friend:)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/21/2016 3:26:00 PM

My hubby doesn't like cheescake so its not something I buy ... if I did i would be 'forced' to eat it all myself and then I would feel guilty! great contest entry:-) hugs Jan xx7

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/21/2016 3:30:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Guilty pleasure! I appreciate you taking the time to stop by and read. I always respect your opinion. Peace my lady:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 3:09:00 PM

Hi Daniel, this is a great entry. WOW, so you would give in after the Doc, said "NO NO!!!" Nicely done, I myself will not pass a bite or two... Enjoyed the rhyming poem. LINDA

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/21/2016 3:12:00 PM

Thank you, PD. She said light humor! I'm addicted it's cheap and easy to make. Even an old fool like me can do it. LOL Peace my friend:)