Betty Bateson Poet Alliteration

Party Play

Parents play party
games
Perfecting playful
parts
Children cherish
chocolate
Soft savory sweet
tarts

Fun for all
forgotten
As adults go away
Leaving little lambs
alone
Protecting party
play

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Mohan Chutani July 12, 2014 at 11:38 PM Betty, nice alliteration of kids' party play. Congrats for nice win. Mohan

Arlene Smith July 12, 2014 at 8:48 PM Congrats on a great win, Betty! Hugs.. Arlene

Seren Roberts July 12, 2014 at 7:17 PM Congrats on a great write ....Seren

Joyce Johnson July 12, 2014 at 3:29 PM Nicely done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Faye Gibson July 12, 2014 at 10:36 AM Well crafted win, Betty. Congratulations.

Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2014 at 8:24 AM You have the perfect name to go along with the theme. I enjoyed your wining poem, congrats.

Paul Callus July 12, 2014 at 7:05 AM Lovely sweet poem Betty. Like your alliteration; not an easy form to do. Congrats on your win. // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta July 12, 2014 at 5:22 AM Funny and witty, Betty and congrats on the win in my contest

Tim Smith July 6, 2014 at 10:58 AM So light and lovely Betty...good luck...hugs Tim