Party of the Garden's Pride

Tea Rose arrives first, claims her chair by the bird bath as Irises turn bearded faces on the path. They offer admiring glances to Gardenias, who promenade ahead of the pink Begonias. Black-Eyed Susans adorn our festive garden deck, where Florida’s Orange Blossoms stand so erect. Shuffling through the garden come seven Dianthus, followed closely by a host of Lisianthus. Tea party underway at the garden table, Four O’Clocks make a tardy showing, unable to raise their weary heads before late afternoon. Here in my back yard with these flowers I commune. Imbibing nectar, joyful hours just slip away, but we vow to meet again the very next day.
*Written June 8, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 9:29 AM
You describe such beauty so elegantly my friend!! Big congrats on your win!!
Parker Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 8:24 PM
congratulation on your win my poetic friend, but..it's Florida where are the geraniums?
Parker Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 5:32 PM
the trick is when you think they have died, they haven't they'll come back
Devonshire Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 5:07 PM
Frederic, I never had luck with geraniums in Florida. My sister grows them quite well in New Jersey where I am currently visiting her. The flowers mentioned are all among those I have successfully grown in Florida.
Hamilton Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 7:28 PM
so nice to see you Carolyn have missed you recently this captures a garden party perfectly love it congrats on win hugs
Nance Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 6:35 PM
Oh very lovely! grats on your win :)
Guzzi Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 4:21 PM
A form done to perfection! Congrad's Light & Love
Gibson Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 3:30 PM
Lovely, Carolyn. Congratulations on your placement in Cyndi's contest. Hope your vacation is great.
Johnson Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 1:31 PM
Your garden sounds wonderful Carolyn. Grea write and win. I misunderstood just a bit, what she wanted so you will find me down the ladder somewhere. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 1:09 PM
This is such a joy to read......I want to sing it to my grandchildren....it can't help but bring a smile to one's face !! Loved it!! Big congrats to you, dear Carolyn!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 7:41 AM
Wow wish I cud join ur lovely party ! Yes a hope there in the end,, vow to meet again the very next day,, wait I m coming,, congrats on big win Carolyn!
Callus Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 5:08 AM
This makes for a most lovely garden party, Carolyn. Hope I won't be intruding if next time I stop by to have a look at the beauty in your back garden! Congrats on your top win. // paul
Horne Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 7:41 AM
enjoyed a lovely visit to your garden, my dear xx
Richards Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 8:04 PM
You have given life and personality to each flower in your garden, Carolyn! Beautiful and sweet !!
George   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 3:13 PM
Lovely sonnet, Carolyn, Soons like the kind of day I would like to be enjoying right now. bfn Lainie
Gibson Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 4:39 PM
Very happy image, Carolyn. Delightful read. Best wishes in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 1:36 PM
- A beautiful poem, Carolyn - thanks for the faithful reader of my poems - (I have not had time to "soup" this past week. - Have a nice Sunday :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Beharry Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 9:38 AM
Lovely flower tea party honouring our "petaled" friends!
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