Gershon Wolf Poet Pantoum

Part-Time Poet

A part-time poet's destined to be plagued by pressure
  The press of time, the pulse of work, vanished years
Barely a moment to reflect, swirling phrases unmeasured
  Envisioning the thrill -- pondering ideas at leisure

The press of time, the pulse of work, vanished years
  Bloody lies my train of thought, derailed once more
Envisioning the thrill -- pondering ideas at leisure
  What wouldn't I give for such unimaginable pleasure

Bloody lies my train of thought, derailed once more
  To start over -- Where was I? -- Cauldrons of frustration
What wouldn't I give for such unimaginable pleasure
  Dream on, part-time poet, of vast unattainable treasure

Comes my annual vacation, free at last from work's shackles
  Alas, stay-cations raise beloved family members' hackles
To start over -- Where was I? -- Cauldrons of frustration
  Barely a moment to reflect, swirling phrases unmeasured

Alas, stay-cations raise beloved family members' hackles
  Wistful aspirations decimated, grim rations of jackals
Barely a moment to reflect, swirling phrases unmeasured
  A part-time poet's destined to be plagued by pressure


                        June 30, 2019
          Entry: Part-time Poet Poetry Contest
                   Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner

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Michelle Faulkner July 11, 2019 at 6:58 PM Although the tone was a bit dark for you, I can appreciate where you're coming from, congratulations and thanks for entering my contest! Gershon Wolf July 11, 2019 at 8:23 PM Yes, you're right. The tone was a bit (too) dark. I realized that on re-reading the poem a day after I'd posted it, but by then...I just let it go. Still and all, not a bad effort...And thank you, Michelle, for recognizing it for the truth there was to it. Appreciated. :) gw

Heidi Sands July 11, 2019 at 8:56 AM Congratulations for your win Gershon :) Gershon Wolf July 11, 2019 at 10:12 AM Thank you for noticing, Heidi, and congrats to you too on your win! :) gw

Line Gauthier July 10, 2019 at 10:29 PM "Plagued by pressure indeed". Well penned, Gershon. Congrats on your most deserving win. Gershon Wolf July 11, 2019 at 10:11 AM Thank you, Line, and congrats on your win in the same contest as well! :) gw

Caren Krutsinger July 2, 2019 at 7:40 AM Wonderfully done! Good luck in Michelle's contest, my friend! Gershon Wolf July 2, 2019 at 12:36 PM Thank you for the support...You know, if I had to do it over again, I would make this pantoum much happier. I've read some great poems for this contest; they are much sunnier than mine... Oh, well. :) gw

Heidi Sands June 30, 2019 at 4:22 PM Wow! Great one Gershon! :) Gershon Wolf June 30, 2019 at 6:03 PM Thanks for the enthusiastic feedback on this pantoum, Heidi! :) gw