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Parting Waters

flowing waters drift bearing shadows for display frigid lifeless forms drained of all their loving warmth like you were that fateful dawn © 10-19-2012 For: Tanka - Pivot Contest

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Date: 11/15/2012 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Su's "Tanka-The Pivot" contest Tanya. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/12/2012 2:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win my dear friend, Tanya! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/11/2012 7:15:00 PM
Beautiful Tanka, Tanya...loaded with meaning...many congrats - Tim
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Date: 11/11/2012 10:48:00 AM
Tanya, congrats in the tanka contest :-) always~ pd
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Date: 11/11/2012 10:42:00 AM
Big Congrats, Tanya, I really like this one.
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Date: 11/2/2012 10:11:00 PM
Great Tanka expressing deep emotion which i enjoy reading today my dear Tanya. Thank you so much for sharing. All the best of luck always! love/hugs:)Leonora
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Date: 10/23/2012 8:48:00 AM
WICKED WRITE MATE LOVE YOUR STYLE XX DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 10/22/2012 12:10:00 PM
that's a lovely expressed Tanka poem. Thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich.
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Date: 10/19/2012 6:45:00 PM
lifeless form drained.. what could be netter than that?... superb tanka, tanya... al the best and huggs!..:)
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Date: 10/19/2012 3:54:00 PM
This is a tremendous write my friend! I really enjoyed this powerful and intriguing poem! What a mysterious but fathomable piece, Great Work!!
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