Part One: Introduction

OK, so i feel like this could be helpful to many people out there today.  I want others to
understand that living in a good matter can change their entire life.  When i was in 10th
grade i disliked everyone, teachers, students, i even disliked myself.  I was full of
anger all the time!  I want to share my life experience.  There is a lot i have to say,
and i hope most of you will consider to read everything i have to say. (The first three
paragraphs are is my experience, and the last one is important for you to read). 
          During the time i was a sophomore i never really liked anything or anyone around
me.  I didn't have any friends.  I hanged out with smokers and drinkers who always skipped
school.  I got into fights and really didn't no what to do in life.  I became a follower.
 someone who despised those around him for no good reason.  So one day i chose a better
path.  nobody encouraged me to change.  i never listen to anyone to even have the chance
to be encouraged to change.  i made a choice, a choice be and do better.  this was my own
self who created a new me. 
          i was then introduced to wrestling. this helped me more because after wrestling
practice i was so drained i couldn't think of being mad at all, and all the wrestlers were
all fun and outgoing.  i became more close to every single wrestler as the season went on.
 Ive always had a six pack and lean muscle, ripped and stuff, but i never could get
stamina that was required to live on as a wrestler.  when i got tired i gave up.  i was
the worst guy on the team.  as the season ended i was left with two permanently damaged
shoulders (tore my rotate cuffs) and a pulled groin.  a part of me said quit but another
part said to keep going.  so i made the choice to tell my coach i want to do better and
participate in the off season wrestling program.

-------plz dont comment on this one! plz read Part Two: What i want you too know!---------

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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