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Part One, From That Dark, Dark Abyss, the Long Black Curtain Rises

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Poe’s stature as a major figure in world literature is primarily based on his 
ingenious and profound short stories, poems, and critical theories, which 
established a highly influential rationale for the short form in both poetry
 and fiction. Regarded in literary histories and handbooks as the architect
 of the modern short story, Poe was also the principal forerunner of the
 “art for art’s sake” movement in nineteenth-century European literature.
 Whereas earlier critics predominantly concerned themselves with moral or
 ideological generalities, Poe focused his criticism on the specifics of
 style and construction that contributed to a work’s effectiveness or failure.
 In his own work, he demonstrated a brilliant command of language and technique
 as well as an inspired and original imagination. Poe’s poetry and short 
 stories greatly influenced the French Symbolists of the late nineteenth 
 century, who in turn altered the direction of modern literature. It is 
 this philosophical and artistic transaction that accounts for much of Poe’s
 importance 

From That Dark, Dark Abyss, The Long Black Curtain Rises Third poet in my poet dedication series Part One: Curtain rises and we see as Raven's prisoner, old Master Poe chained to his cell, held captive by Raven's powers to show down in that dark realm, where blood, doom and gloom reign all is misery, sad loss and never is there anything to gain. From its throne, flies the Raven to start its weekly grand treat as Raven's prison guards, knock old Master Poe off his feet then Raven transform back into the human Ravenking with anger and heartless ire, at Master Poe's head flings the ruby-red ring that Poe once gave to beautiful Annabel Lee and her blood-stained scarf for pitiful cursed Master Poe to see! With a wave of his hands, guards then bring in Annabel Lee she has been beaten, cut deep and bound so she can not flee her beauty yet glows tho' her heart has been sorely battered her grace yet lives, tho' her clothes are all torn and tattered. One can see sorrows in her eyes as at Master Poe she looks for their great romance and its sad tragedy was one for the books gasping at his fallen state, she cries out her true and deep love it is at that very moment Ravenking gives her a hard shove as her frail body hits that hard stone floor with a loud thud out pours her screaming moans, along with more red, red blood. Master Poe rises and yet again does as he has been told reads aloud verses, that for his great fame, his soul he had sold horror's theater now has its usual weekly crowd filtered on in from graves they rose, Ravenking rules them too, for their sins. Eager for more, they chanted, make Master Poe recite and dance verses about his former earthen life and his sad doomed romance we never tire of his loud cries, his misery and his aching pains for he is no better than we with our own dark, guilty and bloody stains Then Master Poe does just as Ravenking with angry voice commands for all there are his prisoners and all of this, his hell given lands! With tears falling, the prisoner now recites for agonizing hours beguiling that hideous crowd with his magnificent poetry showers every verse a shining gem and every poem a marvelous creation all rendered from greatest talent, of our world's top poet's station. Finally taking a breather, Master Poe asks for water to drink tho' his old heart was breaking, he needed a short pause to think how he could convince Ravenking not to again torture his dear love not to beat her and slash her face again with his thorn laced glove with all the guile he could muster, he uttered, she is nothing to me were it not for her and her love, I would now be long dead and free! Hearing such words cried out and with such hard booming contempt Ravenking ordered, take her away, from all torture she is now exempt turning to Master Poe, he asked, old friend why the change of heart have I now broken you and torn your weary and cursed soul apart. Shall we test this and find out if this great transformation is true remember your solemn oath, your sworn vow, how I cleverly trapped you guards bring her back, we shall see if his heart has turned to stone she dies, if Poe dares utters a word as I break a few of her bones dragging her back, her heavy chains are then quickly stripped away nobody heard the prayers that old Master Poe then began to pray. Robert J. Lindley, 1-22-2019 Rhyme, First part of long poem- my poet dedication series- Splitting the ninety verses.

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Date: 3/7/2019 7:59:00 AM
I want to thank you one and all. Your reading these famous poets dedication poem series and your replying has caused me to continue this laborious and very hard task. I so truly appreciate your kindness, support and continued reading of this series. God bless...
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Date: 2/8/2019 12:54:00 PM
Excellent, Robert...you have got me under your spell. Rushing on to read part two, my friend. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/31/2019 10:11:00 PM
You have captured the feeling of Poe, the depth of this amazing poet- perfectly. Incredible my dear friend, your thoughts certainly are deep and powerful. ~ Brandy
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Date: 1/30/2019 7:01:00 AM
You unveil misery, pain, darkness, suffering in a breathtaking weave of story telling.. wrapped up in a powerful diction that holds a diversity of sentiments! A great delight to read! A masterpiece to learn from! Your fine and wonderful work, Robert, is of the highest quality! It is worthy to be read and honoured. A FAV. My deepest regards.
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Date: 1/27/2019 10:52:00 AM
I am spellbound and going now to part 2
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Date: 1/25/2019 12:48:00 PM
Hi Robert, I don't know how I managed it but I read part two first. I think I should wear my glasses. Robert, your creativity and your skill at story-telling are second to none. I was entranced by the power of your skilfull pen. I shall be back to read part two again. This piece as a whole, so far, takes the reader into dark Poesque regions. Only your pen could write this Robert. You are a master of the pen. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike. A fave.
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Date: 1/24/2019 5:43:00 PM
Hello Robert, I did not think it would be like the. I was caught up in every word i red. Now going to part 2. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/24/2019 9:48:00 AM
Brutal and captivating; part two must be immediately read.
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Date: 1/23/2019 7:48:00 PM
I wanted to hurry over to read part two before commenting my friend. I am enthralled to see what happens! : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/23/2019 6:18:00 PM
Wow is all I have to say. This is so perfectly entrancing that I couldn't have stopped reading it even if I had wanted to do so.
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