Parody

Come live with me and be my love,
And gardening pleasures I shall prove.
We'll watch the farmer in his fields
And envy him his golden yields.

I'll let you sift out all the rocks
And shoo invading blackbird flocks
Who steal the seed where e'er it falls
And grab your hat with raucous calls.

You'll help me dig a bed for roses
And kill the slug where he reposes.
You'll weep as loam so rich and fertile
Is commandeered by creeping myrtle.

Coveralls of strongest weaves,
Thorn protective leather sleeves,
Felt lined boots to beat the cold,
We'll buy the best of all that's sold.

A belt of shiny metal studs,
Sharpened shears to clip the buds;
And if these pleasures may thee move,
Come live with me and be my love.

The gardening swains shall dance and sing
The day that you accept my ring.
If these delights thy mind shall move,
Then live with me, and be my love.


For Parody contest  Rec'd 10th place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/6/2010 4:26:00 AM
Very clever- Congrats to you Joyce
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:49:00 PM
Joyce I think your entry was awesome here! Congratulations. You really had the meter of that poem we were parodying too! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:34:00 AM
I remember this delightful parody....it was a favorite from the first! Congratulations, Joyce!! Enjoyable to read this one! Love, Carrie
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:48:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in the Parody contest with this exquisite write so fine and dandy.. a great win for u to enjoy .. another walk to the winners circle.. lets go.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/5/2010 2:58:00 AM
Congrats on the win and thanks for the support
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Date: 5/16/2010 5:33:00 PM
Again wonderful!! you amaze me!! I want to try this!!
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Date: 5/10/2010 3:21:00 PM
Love the way you write!!! always enjoyed
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Date: 5/10/2010 12:39:00 PM
How beautiful, Joyce. You did a fine job on this wonderful parody! Best wishes in the contest! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/10/2010 12:21:00 PM
A great write for the Parody contest Joyce and much good luck ..this is a sure winner .. great words of imagery to set your scenes in each stanza... my entry is Suburbia Special...don't know how much of a parody it really is but its the way I view things in today's busy world as was Dr. Ram's theme.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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