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Parking In Detroit

Lyrics are sung to the music of David Bowie’s “Panic in Detroit” Just another slow rush hour, breathing exhaust fumes Heading to downtown Motor City, won’t get there anytime soon A giant pileup sits at the end of the long commute Parking in Detroit, wished he took another route Boss said come in today, she said come right away Parking in Detroit He cursed the accident that happened, made his arrival late Traffic report said there were constructions Redirected the wrong way A trickle of vehicles were all that could get through Parking in Detroit, wished he took another route Boss said come in today, she said come right away Parking in Detroit Hustling to his car, he made his way to work And found his upper relaxing in her negligee He fled and hid between the vending food machines Then jacked the resting cart parked outside the lounge Avoiding a taxi situation, found the parking lot Raced back uptown with reckless speed, shut off the ringing phone He parked outside a stranger’s house for awhile Parking in Detroit He had to take another route “Baby, please pick up!” She said come right away Parking in Detroit

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Date: 11/27/2020 8:57:00 AM
Hey Freddie cool song, love Bowie but don't know his song, but i'm sure this was a great spin on it! Take care big fella!
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Date: 6/6/2017 5:29:00 PM
A lovely song with an unexpected twist...a hasty exit and an alternative route to go with it! You entertain with a straight face, Freddie! Looks like traffic and parking problems in Detroit are not very different from those in Malta! Regards // paul
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Date: 6/5/2017 6:50:00 PM
Haha! Funny song...but I have a question: Is "upper" another word for "boss"?
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/23/2019 7:23:00 AM
Yep. Upper Manage (or Menage in this pitiful case.) Lol. Ty for your loving support Carole. Love and joy always.
Date: 6/5/2017 12:23:00 PM
A pleasure to read ... A rhythm to enjoy ...
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 6/7/2017 10:27:00 AM
Ty, Probir. Appreciate you stopping by, my friend. Love and peace.
Date: 6/5/2017 9:54:00 AM
wow! That middle part about her relaxing in her negligee was a surprise! :) and the ending! lol Nice song!
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 6/7/2017 10:26:00 AM
Ty, Becca. I know it's kinda racy, but that's the way the story goes, eh. Love the loving support. Love always.

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