Park Bench-2

Park bench

Memories haven’t blurred
Of how we were once love birds
And sat here together
In good and foul weather.

And of how the ones more bold
In ultimate pleasure rolled
In this coarse garden bench
With some cheap paid-for wench.

And of how after they left
Someone slept after a theft
Or a beggar for a night
Lay here and forgot his plight.

21 Mar 13.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/9/2013 10:51:00 AM
Good afternoon Jag.. stopping in to say hi... always Linda
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Date: 3/29/2013 5:16:00 PM
Hi, Jag. Long time no see. Glad to finally see your bench poem. Good job with it. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/29/2013 3:06:00 AM
Jag, excellent write, good luck ....have a peaceful time....David
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Date: 3/28/2013 10:24:00 PM
a good poem Jag...xox~pd
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Date: 3/28/2013 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations jag, these benches see some life don't they xx
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Date: 3/27/2013 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win Jag....Donna
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Date: 3/27/2013 4:07:00 PM
A lot of life lived on that bench. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/26/2013 10:43:00 AM
Jag; This is awesome. I justy loved it. If all the benches in a park could talk - I wonder what stories would they tell? Thanks ...... lucilla
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Date: 3/24/2013 9:09:00 AM
A really good couplet describing the situation. Well written, Jag. Enjoyed the read :) thx for stopping by.
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Date: 3/24/2013 8:44:00 AM
Excellent couplet conceived from the theme my dear friend Jag. I love it! This is already a winner for me. Good luck and best wishes in the contest! Thank you so much for stopping by and again for your support in my contest. More power and blessings to you always! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/24/2013 5:19:00 AM
Lovely Jag! - Good luck in the contest! - Have a nice Easter! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/21/2013 5:52:00 PM
yes, it is intriguing to think of all the things those park benches have witnessed! good poem jag, hope it does well in the contest (soupymail)
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Date: 3/21/2013 11:23:00 AM
Wonderful poem Jag....Donna
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