Park

Pull off the path stop the onward rush. Come to the aside don’t worry or fuss. Enjoy the breeze the smoke through the trees. Take time to pray fall on bended knees. Stop the onward rush Hear the forest’s hush. The brook’s gurgling chime is for all of us.

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Colleen Bono

Date: 11/18/2009 8:12:00 AM

Thank you for the comment on my poem.I hope I can find some help or someone who will take me serious about how I feel.If I am meant to stay alive,help will find me and hopefully soon cause I don't know how much more I can take.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/12/2009 2:59:00 PM

I work for the weekend for just these times! fun write! Deb! jimbo

Jared Pickett

Date: 11/12/2009 10:55:00 AM

I really like the rhyme scheme in this write.... Wonderful write friend.....:JP]

Richard-Jamaal Keen

Date: 11/12/2009 8:35:00 AM

Thank you for the comments on your son, he is so very blessed! I will stay strong and I will stay reading your work because this makes me wnat to go sit in the park right now

Brian Strand

Date: 11/12/2009 7:43:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments Debbie.Go for it ,all that knowledge within you is there for a purpose, to share with others.When you do its so simple these days to upload for others to share.Best wishes with your projects to be

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/11/2009 11:41:00 PM

Deb. The forest hush has an amazing impact upon quiet souls. I love the peacefulness of these words. Lovingly, Dane

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/11/2009 7:46:00 PM

Take the time to pray ... wonderful write .. wonderful line and awesome poetry from your creative pen, Deborah... thankxxx for your stirring blog comment today... very powerful and poignant... sharing on Soup is wonderful .. happy to be part of this awesome family ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

P Sheart

Date: 11/11/2009 5:00:00 PM

Hi Debra, A lovely write. Nature in its full glory is the silent rythem of life that keeps us in tune to what's important. Love this! I can hear that gurgling brook! Here in Alaska today it's snowing. The trees are laden with snow and it's just beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty

Marty Owens

Date: 11/11/2009 3:37:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your nice poem tonight..Marty