Paris Re-Writes Shakespeare

Your father’s words agree I’ve passed his test
Yes, I confess, I’m viewed as idiot
for bowing, but our future I’ve addressed -
Now, I have met and won my Capulet.

Ah, Juliet; my dear sweet Juliet.
Agreement’s done; and now I’ve come to claim
my prize. My love, you gain my princely name.


Countless the times I’ve come here nerves on edge.
Two tiring years, have passed. Your statuette
now speaking from the porch your solemn pledge
reminds the world – we kept the rule he set.

Ah Juliet; my dear sweet Juliet
Verona hears announcement of our vows -
I, Paris, take you dearest as my spouse.


Who’s this approaching porch on bended knee?
arriving late with horse and chariot.
It’s Romeo of Montague  we see
but what he finds is just a silhouette

of Juliet; his long gone Juliet.
His kiss of death, imagination’s joke
I, Paris passed and gained the marriage yoke.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 10:00 PM
Reason,. Congratulations:) goodnight ~SKAT~
Zerbst Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 10:54 AM
Quite different from the usual tale. I especially like the last seven lines; excellent phrasing there. It's catchy too. I shall remember this poem for some time to come.
Poteet Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 9:57 PM
I appreciate the placement, Isaiah, and the welcome comment too. Have a great day!
Hamilton Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 5:35 PM
great pen Reason congrats on win hugs
Poteet Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 11:58 PM
Thank you, Shadow, a bit off center of the usual connnection; but it worked...I'm almost always for the underdog.
Mehta Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 6:10 AM
Enjoyed the write on Juliet and congrats on the win, reason
Poteet Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 8:50 AM
thank you, Dr. Ram, good to hear from you always.
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