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Paris la nuit

The Eiffel Tower stabbed at a midnight
as blue as an old Muddy Waters track.
From a distance, its lace-iron skeleton
looked like a slick and oily spider-web
crowned with a glittering neon diamond.

(My Grandmère's home is across the street from it).
“Do you want to go climb it?” I’d asked Peter (my bf).
“Naah,” he’d replied, “too crowded - what’s next?”
We’ve been tourist-ing all of the big Paris sights.

As we night cruised the Seine, the rivière looked dark
and perilous - a phthalo-green snake slithering north
westerly at six times the speed of the Nile.

We took a guided tour of the Louvre - it’s a crowded
fortress and you can’t see the Mona Lisa up close.
We day-toured the palace at Versailles, with its ghosts
of past grandeurs and revolutionary, royal beheadings.

The Arc de Triomphe is just an unsafe round-about.
As we Uber’d around it, I turned to Peter saying,
“Joke time: What’s more dangerous:
a shark or an American driver in a Paris traffic circle?”
.
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Paris la nuit = Paris at night

Muddy Waters was a singer and musician - a delta blues man considered the "father of Chicago blues." Chicago blues was electrified, hard driving and drum backed. The Rolling Stones took their name from one of his songs. He was the original “Hoochie Coochie Man."
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Rodgers Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 4:32 AM
Dear Anais, your poem takes me on a nocturnal journey through the City of Lights, where the Eiffel Tower stands tall against a midnight sky, evoking memories of Muddy Waters' blues. The imagery of its lace-iron structure resembling a neon-crowned spider-web is striking. I love how your personal anecdotes add depth, capturing the essence of tourist experiences amidst Parisian grandeur and historical echoes.Your poem is a captivating snapshot of Paris by night, inviting reflection and exploration. I love taking the journey to Paris. Blessings, Daniel
Vionet Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 5:29 AM
Thank you, Daniel - you write the loveliest reviews - sometimes I think they're better than my poems =]
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 3:26 PM
The city of lights, certainly has some muddy looking waters at night Anais, and very touristy too, you are very lucky to have a Grandmère across the street from the Eiffel tower, I’m a bit confused as to the building behind you on the right, is it an inset, wonderful poem, cheers David
Vionet Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 7:04 PM
Thanks (poem). ? Sorry, I have no idea, I’m just dancing on the roof =]
Conn Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 2:10 PM
Erecting smiles wherever you go. Beautiful dress.
Vionet Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 7:04 PM
Thank you! =]
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