Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

Parapet of Beauty

"The greatest unrest in this world 
comes from noises & sounds we create"

Parapet Of Beauty

Blossoming thoughts of candor beneath a parapet of beauty  
Our he/she God has abandoned all preconceptions 
that is what compassion does in the name of love!
Lets place our existence in the arms of a shimmer-Deity 
lets hold our tongue silent & stretch out our arms instead

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Anil Deo May 25, 2022 at 10:25 PM What compassion does -- What silence does -- I agree with your readers, and Harry Horsman

Harry Horsman May 25, 2022 at 1:53 AM You certainly are a wise one, Vie. love the message and the poem.

Victor Buhagiar May 24, 2022 at 11:15 PM least said soon mended.

Anil Deo May 23, 2022 at 10:13 AM The last line beautifully teaches us to approach the Mystery of Life & Creation, with apt attitudes. Shalom shalom, peace dear Vie

Alexis Y. May 21, 2022 at 7:48 PM WoW! Mystic, I agree with the message of your well written piece. I found it deep and thought provoking. Great job. Have a nice evening:-) Alexis

Rico Leffanta May 21, 2022 at 11:13 AM A tongue stretching out also has its charm ...Enjoyed! Aloha!

Judy Ball May 21, 2022 at 7:48 AM So often what we say is not near as eloquent as what we DON'T say. Actions speak much louder than words. Brings to mind an old saying that goes: "Your actions speak so loud I can't hear what you're saying." Nicely done my friend, Go Bless, JB

Valsa George May 21, 2022 at 3:33 AM "lets hold our tongue silent & stretch out our arms instead''...... So wisely said, Rose!