Melani Udaeta Poet Triolet

Paranoid Inspired By Ozzy Tribute

I walked in and was blindsided,
your racing pulse I had to steal.
With the first glance fate decided,
I walked in and was blindsided.
Crazy train of thoughts misguided
this love to me seemed so unreal.
I walked in and was blindsided,
your racing pulse I had to steal.

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Bill Baker July 31, 2025 at 6:41 PM Interesting Triolet, Melani. I like it! Bill Melani Udaeta July 31, 2025 at 8:50 PM Thank you so much. Blessings.

Benjamin Bartley July 31, 2025 at 9:18 AM Ozzy aint dead. He's just drinking goat's blood with Elvis. Thanks for sharing! Melani Udaeta July 31, 2025 at 10:03 AM He will be with us for eternity. Be blessed.