Paralyzed Petals

Welcome to the circus 
of discrimination-
where soft subtle glances 
and fragrant
touches of femininity 
are burnt in ashes,
through howling rays
from the sinister sun,
triggering wildfire
chaos, 
conquering and controlling
roles of women;
endlessly shape-shifting
from predatory postures
of pretend protectors,
that twist and turn
tangled heartstrings
from a patriarchal pantomime
of their treacherous charade,
obnoxiously oppressing
obscured boundaries,
with their art of arrogance,
placing labels upon
our need for freedom
as sheer ignorance
of aliens aspiring for acceptance. 

But what if there was
more to a flower,
than to be left-
dreamlessly
paralyzed in puddles
of poisoned petals?
Is there no wind
that can wash away
wounds of the world
engraved as a
secret symphony
of sorrow, 
within sepia sepals? 

Will storms carrying
songs of a
suppressed soul be
forever heard 
as forced dreams? 
Mimicking motionless mountains,
silently static, mistaken for
serenity,
whilst enchanting hills
draped in olive green silk
are confused as gilded
stars in worn novellas,
streaming rivulets of
emerald lakes,
where manuscripts
of tears are apprehended 
as melodramatic melancholy. 
Oblivious to the wilderness,
where words whirl as poetic 
prophecies,
descending as 
theatrical thunder,
striking upon abandoned
entities of earth, eclipsed with
fingerprints of
love lingering 
liquid fears of
a female fighter,
rising above acrobatic
tyrants—
for maternal daffodils are lions,
glazed in an idle arias,
composing battles 
using only words as weapons.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/14/2023 12:20:00 PM
Wow! What a brain full! Your frankness is gift.
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Date: 8/21/2023 12:50:00 PM
Empress, your images and words are so unique and original - "maternal daffodils are lions." Just one example of your word prowess. Your imagery tumbles like a spring stream from one line to the next as you explore the way woman, and femininity, are treated. Deeply mused perception put into metaphor! Best wishes for the contest if this is for a contest! Blessings.
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Date: 8/21/2023 10:07:00 AM
Your ability to continually astound us with your captivating, astonishing, and awe-inspiring language never fails. This profoundly evocative, deeply poignant, and undeniably vivid composition delves into the unfortunate reality of how delicate petals of femininity are exposed to the scorching flames of our unforgiving society. Your poetic and masterful depiction effectively sheds light on the plight endured by women in certain cultural contexts, wherein they face oppression and mistreatment.
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Date: 8/21/2023 6:30:00 AM
Oh boy, Michelle would love this one, a recurring theme of hers. You poetically (and done awesomely) describe the situation in some cultures, ie, the oppression and maltreatment of women. "But what if there was more to a flower...?" Well, there is much, much more to her than a mere sex slave or house maid. Women deserve to be treated as equals, loved and cherished
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Date: 8/21/2023 9:05:00 AM
Absolutely, this world would be a better place is many would think like you do. Thank you kingy. Grateful
Date: 8/21/2023 6:12:00 AM
My dearest Ink, you never cease to surprise me with your intriguing, flabbergasting and jaw-dropping words.. This is a very emotive, heart-aching and palpably descriptive write about how feminine petals are subjected to smoldering fire of this cruel world. Your expressions are so deeply impactful, depicting the agony of of wanting to be accepted as equals and yearning for freedom, whilst showing angst towards the tyranny of this world.. "Maternal daffodils are lions.. " Now here comes the power!
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