Parallel Paradigm

In temporal time my heart speaks in mime
Thru celestial chime a sorrow sublime
Parallel paradigm punitive crime
Galactic grime of love’s climactic climb
With savoring shadows I’m lost in rhyme
Like lingering lime a paradox prime.



April.26.2017
Rhymers delight-internal monorhyme-2 
Sponsored by: John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Y. Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 5:19 PM
Congratulations on your winning write: -)Alexis
Warrior Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 11:49 AM
Thank you Alexis...^WW^
Hamilton Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 2:41 PM
Sorry WW for the low placement, you've got to simplify things for me lol, I judge blind but enjoyed the rhyme as always, didn't get the gist of this one, my bad!
Warrior Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 11:48 AM
Thank you John...I know I know lol...^WW^
Green Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 5:29 PM
Very creative and very cool. This should do really well in the contest. Best wishes.
Warrior Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 11:47 AM
Thank you Chris...^WW^
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