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Parallel Paradigm

In temporal time my heart speaks in mime
Thru celestial chime a sorrow sublime
Parallel paradigm punitive crime
Galactic grime of love’s climactic climb
With savoring shadows I’m lost in rhyme
Like lingering lime a paradox prime.



April.26.2017
Rhymers delight-internal monorhyme-2 
Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Alexis Y.

Date: 4/30/2017 5:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning write: -)Alexis

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/2/2017 11:49:00 AM

Thank you Alexis...^WW^

John Hamilton

Date: 4/30/2017 2:41:00 PM

Sorry WW for the low placement, you've got to simplify things for me lol, I judge blind but enjoyed the rhyme as always, didn't get the gist of this one, my bad!

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/2/2017 11:48:00 AM

Thank you John...I know I know lol...^WW^

Chris Green

Date: 4/26/2017 5:29:00 PM

Very creative and very cool. This should do really well in the contest. Best wishes.

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/2/2017 11:47:00 AM

Thank you Chris...^WW^