Parallax

Perhaps my love’s lust,
a deep desire to entwine,
inflicting a benign burn.


In the womb of space,
two feathers orbit bliss beats,
mirroring divine intent.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Buhagiar Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 1:48 AM
THE feathers in space seem to be more in syn with God's pure love.
Seeker Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 6:23 AM
Wise words, Victor
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