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Paradox

Wrap mind around this: Global warming cause Ice Age Scientists dismayed

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/17/2017 9:24:00 AM

I saw a shadow on the wall and dec ided to write about it.Mable and Gable came to me in my dream.So I wrote about it.Paradox is a very interesting Haiku. it is so true.The weather is a little confused.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/16/2017 6:08:00 AM

In Georgia, it's true, every day a new season! Crazy weather! Nice haiku, Freddie!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/12/2017 12:44:00 PM

- Yes, scientists dismayed ... but it's the truth ... - great written, Freddie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/11/2017 1:41:00 PM

It feels like an ice age this past month.

Abosede Ogundare

Date: 2/11/2017 1:16:00 PM

Growing up when I heard about global warming, I thought, men are just paying for the damages done to the cloud. But scientists won't just coming up with explanation for every change. LOL. Nice write Freddie.

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/11/2017 12:30:00 PM

Funniest thing...

Josefina Costales

Date: 2/11/2017 8:40:00 AM

Not to be a nitpick, but isn't the 2nd line supposed to be 7 syllables. I'm just starting to write a few so I don't know if one can have 7 or 8. Sorry, but the piece itself is a mind-provoker.

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 2/11/2017 9:00:00 AM

Ty for catching that, Josefina. Didn't count my fingers right, lol. Appreciate you stopping by though. Love and hugs to you.