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Paradise Senryu String

sweet awakening
paradise is not a place
it's a person.....YOU

angelic language
your eyes speak heavenly words
my heart's listening

boundaries unchained
my soul mounts on wings of dreams
destination....YOU

strong arms enfold me
fulfilment of every dream
Euphoria's home

passion's exhaled breath
lips seal this solemn moment
your eyes...my haven

Eileen

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/23/2014 9:12:00 AM

Oh all jumbled up... please untangle..sorry ---rajat

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/23/2014 9:09:00 AM

sweet awakening paradise is not a place it's a person.....YOU Grand opening lines. What a beginning!! And the end!? Equally grand a wow poem..love...rajat passion's exhaled breath lips seal this solemn moment your eyes...my haven

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/19/2014 12:22:00 PM

Ahh!! Great work before or after the holiday or maybe during..You are probably refreshed and ready to write..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2014 9:52:00 PM

this is beautiful, Eileen. What are you up to lately?

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/17/2014 5:36:00 AM

- A delicious and romantic paradise my dear friend Eileen - "YOU" !!!! is the best in the whole world - (are you arrived home?) - I travel to my paradise on Saturday :) - Have a nice day - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 9/16/2014 5:43:00 PM

Sorry I'm late, but when it comes to Paradise, better late than not at all. Great write

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/16/2014 7:33:00 AM

Being in paradise and still being alive is an achievement that few manage! Great string of exquisite pearls of Senryu, dear Eileen!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/15/2014 6:25:00 PM

So very beautiful Eileen. So dearly romantic.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 9/15/2014 3:22:00 PM

Yes passion is bliss and how u express it in passionate apreciation of love is lyrical and fab. So nice to read u again. Take care.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/14/2014 9:26:00 AM

I bring my paradise with me and she makes every destination magical. I love this romantic write Eileen. I hope you are enjoying your trip. Hugs Rick.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/13/2014 11:37:00 PM

filled with sweet passion... so intricately woven, Eileen..huggs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/13/2014 11:09:00 AM

This is such a sweet and romantic write, Eileen! This right here, is an example of a full hearted woman! I really enjoy that idea of finding paradise in a person, and I suppose not everybody is fortunate enough to find that haven, but when they do, all I can say is wow for them--I sure enjoyed getting a glimpse of your paradise. Hope you're having loads of fun <3! As for the link, thank you so much for still being so interested in it, you're a sweetie-- here it is -- http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=529150

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/13/2014 2:59:00 AM

Absolutely pure spiritual romance Eileen. Paradise is indeed a destination in the heart shared. Eyes that make you feel safe and free, thats perfect love. " My soul mounts on dreams, destination you..." that's so damn pretty...J.A.B.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/13/2014 1:22:00 AM

Oh my poetic queen, chess was so lonely n deserted widout u,, back wid divine words, great work dear!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/12/2014 7:11:00 PM

this is wonderful, eileen! i've missed you recently. good to see a poem of yours here...

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/12/2014 4:42:00 PM

Hi sweet Eileen,O just saw your name and Wow..Am so glad you made it to.be online ..Xou're heavenly and blissfully inspired.Enjoy the rest of your holiday to the UTMOST.Wish I was there on vacation,the place is beautiful and people so.warm. Sanagapo-Does that mean I love you? : ).Love you and miss you sis : )