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Paradise Found

and when i closed my eyes
there we were
flying high
above lost shangri-la
glorious melodies echoing
through the valley
~ together again



AP: 1st place 2025, Honorable Mention 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Parker Avatar
November 27, 2022 at 7:41 PM
Together again...journey of two as one is indescribable joy. Thx, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
November 27, 2022 at 10:01 PM
Thank you, Arlo ~
Faulkner Avatar
November 26, 2022 at 10:53 AM
So evocative of the freedom of happiness, beautiful~
Gauthier Avatar
November 26, 2022 at 11:06 AM
Thanks, Michelle ~
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