Robin L. Gass Poet Free verse

Paradise Found

I can feel you tremble
as in my mind I lie with you
my breath a warm ripple
across your flesh
that waits for my touch
a whisper of a promise to come
of embrace and caress
soft kisses turning into jagged air
the taste of you that plays upon my tongue
as your scent fills me
consumes me
and what is woman within me
lives because of you
you are the power that drives me
my tower
the strength that I cling to
as I cradle you
in the secret heart of me
pleasure waves washing over us
to the sweet rhythm of our loving
rising like the changing tide
I feel your force grow
our hearts crashing
like waves on our shore
until the ebb
and we are complete
and I lay warm in your sunshine.
Paradise.

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John Rhinem February 28, 2009 at 5:59 PM Smile~this "Beautiful" write here, is a dream come true for someone dear~beyond a doubt~why? Because it is "You!!!!"~"Thank You" for stopping by "Precious, Gifted and Beautiful Robin!!!!"~For, "I Always Love To See 'You!!!!'"~Glad Your feeling better too!!! And, "Thank You" also, for "Your Beautiful Verses You Leave Myself!!!"~"My Love Forever To 'You,' John!!!"~"Sweet Dreams Beautiful Robin!!!!":)))

Debbie Guzzi February 15, 2009 at 11:56 AM Lucky couple there! Light & Love Debbie

Sharon Winter January 28, 2009 at 5:49 AM Ah yes, sounds like paradise to me too. Passion oozes from this steamy, loving write. Well written indeed. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt January 28, 2009 at 5:38 AM This certainly sounds like paradise alright! Love the passion that's is implied in this through your use of wonderful imagery. Excellent! Michael

Tyler Martin January 28, 2009 at 3:51 AM I Can't Wait To Find My Paradise. Nice Poem. Tyler

Raul Moreno January 28, 2009 at 12:28 AM Great passion comes from your heart Robin. I enjoyed this one dearly, 2 thumbs up! on this one...Raul

Laurie Ginn January 27, 2009 at 9:30 PM Very nice Robin such beautiful love and passion. loveudo Laurie

Maryam Jameela Haniff January 27, 2009 at 3:53 PM ooh sweeeeet! filled with soo much love and passion! u have a special way with your words...great write!...*Maryam

Christopher Higgins January 27, 2009 at 3:08 PM The lucky guy who gets this embrace.. an embrace that is filled with love and passion..Your words ignites flames my friend...they come alive and breathe life in this write..making the reader blush from what he/she has walked upon. Terrific love and sweetness taking up occupancy in your words. Great write.

John Rhinem January 27, 2009 at 2:44 PM The more I behold "You" I believe, the more crystal clear it truly becomes--this over-flowing well, of "Beauty Inside of You!!!!"-What a "Dream Come True You Are Going To Be," for the one sooo blessed, to forever hold "Your Priceless Heart" within their hands!!!!-Smile-"Beautiful Write!!!!"-"My Love To You Always Dear Robin, John!!!"-"Smile-Heave A Glorious Day!!!"-Bye!:)

John Rhinem January 27, 2009 at 2:39 PM Yes, paradise, beyond any doubt, for the one whom captures "Your Precious Heart!!!?-"Hello Again Precious and Gifted and Beautiful Robin!!!"-Smile-So much passion and beauty within this wonderful write of "Yours!!!"-You paint such a lovely, gentle and warm picture here dear lady--enchanting and mesmerizing I would say, within all of "Your Tenderness and Love!!!"....cont....