Paradise Found

I can feel you tremble
as in my mind I lie with you
my breath a warm ripple
across your flesh
that waits for my touch
a whisper of a promise to come
of embrace and caress
soft kisses turning into jagged air
the taste of you that plays upon my tongue
as your scent fills me
consumes me
and what is woman within me
lives because of you
you are the power that drives me
my tower
the strength that I cling to
as I cradle you
in the secret heart of me
pleasure waves washing over us
to the sweet rhythm of our loving
rising like the changing tide
I feel your force grow
our hearts crashing
like waves on our shore
until the ebb
and we are complete
and I lay warm in your sunshine.
Paradise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/28/2009 5:59:00 PM
Smile~this "Beautiful" write here, is a dream come true for someone dear~beyond a doubt~why? Because it is "You!!!!"~"Thank You" for stopping by "Precious, Gifted and Beautiful Robin!!!!"~For, "I Always Love To See 'You!!!!'"~Glad Your feeling better too!!! And, "Thank You" also, for "Your Beautiful Verses You Leave Myself!!!"~"My Love Forever To 'You,' John!!!"~"Sweet Dreams Beautiful Robin!!!!":)))
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Date: 2/15/2009 11:56:00 AM
Lucky couple there! Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:49:00 AM
Ah yes, sounds like paradise to me too. Passion oozes from this steamy, loving write. Well written indeed. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:38:00 AM
This certainly sounds like paradise alright! Love the passion that's is implied in this through your use of wonderful imagery. Excellent! Michael
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Date: 1/28/2009 3:51:00 AM
I Can't Wait To Find My Paradise. Nice Poem. Tyler
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Date: 1/28/2009 12:28:00 AM
Great passion comes from your heart Robin. I enjoyed this one dearly, 2 thumbs up! on this one...Raul
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Date: 1/27/2009 9:30:00 PM
Very nice Robin such beautiful love and passion. loveudo Laurie
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Date: 1/27/2009 3:53:00 PM
ooh sweeeeet! filled with soo much love and passion! u have a special way with your words...great write!...*Maryam
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Date: 1/27/2009 3:08:00 PM
The lucky guy who gets this embrace.. an embrace that is filled with love and passion..Your words ignites flames my friend...they come alive and breathe life in this write..making the reader blush from what he/she has walked upon. Terrific love and sweetness taking up occupancy in your words. Great write.
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Date: 1/27/2009 2:44:00 PM
The more I behold "You" I believe, the more crystal clear it truly becomes--this over-flowing well, of "Beauty Inside of You!!!!"-What a "Dream Come True You Are Going To Be," for the one sooo blessed, to forever hold "Your Priceless Heart" within their hands!!!!-Smile-"Beautiful Write!!!!"-"My Love To You Always Dear Robin, John!!!"-"Smile-Heave A Glorious Day!!!"-Bye!:)
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Date: 1/27/2009 2:39:00 PM
Yes, paradise, beyond any doubt, for the one whom captures "Your Precious Heart!!!?-"Hello Again Precious and Gifted and Beautiful Robin!!!"-Smile-So much passion and beauty within this wonderful write of "Yours!!!"-You paint such a lovely, gentle and warm picture here dear lady--enchanting and mesmerizing I would say, within all of "Your Tenderness and Love!!!"....cont....
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