Teddy Kimathi Poet Free verse

Paradise

Her face glows in a divine halo,
while her thoughts get lost
in letters; yes, letters!; between
the letters, sentences and words;
she sees God in the form of beautiful words
for the soul; words that are too hard to find....

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Poet Destroyer A July 30, 2014 at 8:04 AM Sure, thing!

Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2014 at 12:14 PM Hi Teddy, :) Congratulations, on your winning poem... Love Linda Teddy Kimathi July 30, 2014 at 2:05 AM Thanks Linda! <3 ^_^

Ziad Gadou July 24, 2014 at 9:09 PM great write! Teddy Kimathi July 25, 2014 at 8:21 AM Thank you Ziad. Hope we can work on dark-themed poems with you in the future! :-)

Jan Allison July 23, 2014 at 12:41 PM a few short words beautifully crafted - congratulations on your great win. hugs jan xxx Teddy Kimathi July 24, 2014 at 12:34 AM Thank you very much Jan! ^_^

Paul Callus July 23, 2014 at 9:46 AM You too, like Faye, were inspired by the divine; short but meaningful poem. Congratulations, Teddy! // paul Teddy Kimathi July 23, 2014 at 10:17 AM Thank you very much Paul. I realized that the best poems come from meditation and silence, where the invisible words slowly become visible. Regards, Teddy.

Robert Lindley July 23, 2014 at 8:39 AM So much, so beautifully said in such few lines. Congrats on your win!! Teddy Kimathi July 23, 2014 at 10:15 AM Thank you Robert! :-)

Richard Lamoureux July 23, 2014 at 8:38 AM Beautiful! Congratulations. Teddy Kimathi July 23, 2014 at 10:14 AM Thank you Mr. Richard! :-)

Pandita Sietesantos July 23, 2014 at 7:58 AM Congratulations to you Teddy for your fine win. I enjoyed reading this beautiful piece. Warmest regards! Teddy Kimathi July 23, 2014 at 10:12 AM Oh, sorry Pandita. Maybe a computer error, lol. Thanks for enjoying my work, and applauding me! ^_^ Teddy Kimathi July 23, 2014 at 10:05 AM Thank you very much for your applause Dr. Upma! ^_^

Arlene Smith July 23, 2014 at 6:52 AM Congrats on a great win, Teddy my friend! Hugs.. Arlene Teddy Kimathi July 23, 2014 at 10:09 AM Thanks in loads Arlene! ^_^

Barbara Gorelick July 23, 2014 at 6:13 AM You have written "beautiful words"..so very pretty. I love short poems..it takes talent to say a lot in a short form .BG Teddy Kimathi July 23, 2014 at 10:08 AM Thanks for your kind praise Barbara! ^_^ You can see more of my works in Shot Glass Journal! ^_^

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 23, 2014 at 5:56 AM Very lovely write Teddy,, loved a lot,, congrats on huge win! Teddy Kimathi July 23, 2014 at 10:06 AM Thank you very much for your applause Dr. Upma! ^_^

Casarah Nance July 14, 2014 at 9:11 AM Oh that is a lovely poem Teddy, you have created a piece of paradise Teddy Kimathi July 17, 2014 at 3:53 AM Thanks Casarah! ^_^