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Paradise

I sit in the sun, as leaves rustle around me Looking out over the open yard, as peaceful as can be Bright blue skies, quietness, freedom so nice I now live where to me, it is paradise Feeders are ready, waiting for birds to arrive Gardens are ready, waiting for flowers to strive To grow with me, as I rest, heal and create I am now blessed with paradise in my pleasant fate Heidi Sands 3/23/25 (C)opyright

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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/24/2025 10:54:00 AM
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Dear Heidi, the mood of your poem reflects the peace and beauty you feel inside. Your rhyme is expressed so wonderfully. I can feel the satisfaction of a relaxing and appreciative exhalation in the tone of your lovely pen. I exhale and relax too :) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/24/2025 11:31:00 AM
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I am happy to hear that. Thank you very much Susan. I hope all is well :)
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 3/23/2025 11:14:00 AM
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Hope you are at peace now after what you have been through Heidi. Your poem is wonderful
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/23/2025 11:26:00 AM
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Hi Oliver. Yes, I am very much at peace and very fortunate. Thank you :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2025 11:00:00 AM
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- A place you can call home and feel safe, Heidi :) - So happy for you :) - hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/23/2025 11:25:00 AM
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Exactly Anne-Lise. Thank you so much . Hugs :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/23/2025 10:56:00 AM
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Hello Heidi, you sound very happy. i am so glad you found your paradise. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/23/2025 11:25:00 AM
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Thank you very much Darlene. I hope you have a nice day Hugs. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/23/2025 10:43:00 AM
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Submitted 3/23/25
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