Paradise

The shrouds of clouds slim whim accost the sun — The phat and fat, ruddy red and horizon muddy one. Underscore of wavy grass, a sea of bees, life’s core. A hiss of bliss, a slap, a tap of tippy-toe on crazy shore. The forest rests on the pregnant breast of the fireball. The teasing test of wheezing labor on a neighbor’s shawl. The quake of vermillion beads, the wake of creation’s seeds. No weeds in rebirth, the girth of bittersweet tease, broken water bleeds. Crusty-Winter’s crossed. Trim sails from rusty nails and splinter’s cross. Behold the boast from coast to coast, warm the cold, the lost. 10/4/2018 Battle XI/Sponsor - Juli-Michelle
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Faulkner Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 4:22 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 5:24 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Watson Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 4:10 AM
Gosh, mine seems puny compared to this giant of the rhyme battle. Now I understand what's required for the next challenge! Congratulations, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 6:31 AM
Thanks so much, dear Wendy! Hugs...Kim
Michelle Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 6:14 PM
Kim, I loved the interwoven rhymes here, a well-deserved win! Congratulations on your placement in my Rhyme Battle contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 9:00 PM
Thank you, Juli-Michelle!
Wolf Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 11:27 AM
Incredibly rhyme schemes, woven so seamlessly into these wonderful verses. A FAV! Best wishes, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 3:41 PM
Thank you, my friend!
One Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Lovely lines that create vivid imagery Kim..
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Faulkner Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Great flow, vivid and impressive, good luck in the contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Turner Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 12:41 PM
I like your style, Kim. Almost recognizable. lol reads like a winner. I love internal rhymes.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 7:39 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
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