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Paradise - Sedoka

A mysterious place Created for everyone Some said it's the real heaven Beyond human's eye A conundrum to one's mind Aspiration to all souls. By: Mari Sadatoku - March 10,2013 8:17 p.m.

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Date: 10/22/2024 6:52:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:13:00 PM
Mari, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2016 1:07:00 PM
MARI, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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Date: 4/27/2013 6:19:00 AM
awesome poem mari
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Date: 3/12/2013 4:28:00 AM
Hi I was checking out new poets, came across yours I really like this poem :) ... Welcome!!! GypsyofEssence
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Date: 3/11/2013 8:56:00 AM
HELLO.NICE TO MEET YOU.I AM FROM BULGARIA.
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