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Paradise-Acrostic

Powerful was the voice of the Eternal God
Allowing no disobedience in His holy garden
Raging winds stripped trees of their leaves
Adam had no justification for his deception
Darkness and rain descended on everything 
Internal strife began to trouble his conscience 
Serene thoughts escaped from his teary eyes
Eve fleeing found refuge in his strong arms.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/26/2015 2:40:00 PM
I do like your take on the paradise theme Andrew good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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