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While shopping in a small suburb near Sydney, Australia, this wonderful parade passed right in front of me. I had no idea of the occasion.

Say, oh! It must be some sort of a Day! Streets are bristling in baskets and laughter. Shop fronts floating in banners, and somewhere.... The concrete under our feet Throbs with beginning, distant beat. Motorcycle putt Two by two Stern-faced riders Dark in blue Legions of boots and brown, Their arms fling high and back Hats cocked, unfurling like salute. Swing stick switches Left foot...right! With the snap A silken tassel twitches And the horns behind the column crack Suddenly, the breathless beating air! Snatches of the melody are familiar. Golden trumpets raise their throats to catch the sun, Blaring open-mouthed triumphant chorus- Good, we are good! Strong, we are strong! Warriors, honorable and glorious! The drumbeat measures out in disappearing lines Gradually, gently diminishing to perspective. The taste of glory ages and dries upon the years Where crumpled paper scrapes along the wind And traffic lights go red and green again.

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Date: 9/18/2022 5:44:00 AM
Such a vibrant description! I felt like I was there enjoying the festivities, and somewhat disappointed to see it all end and the hum drum of everyday life return. Beautifully written.
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 9/18/2022 5:33:00 PM
Such a rewarding reply! Thank you. That participation thing was just what I was trying to do! Sometimes my stuff works! Elizabeth
Date: 9/17/2022 9:43:00 PM
Whoa... That last stanza is certainly haunting... yet oh-so-true. Brilliantly penned, my friend. ~ Gershon
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Date: 8/17/2022 12:39:00 PM
Beautifully described and structured Elizabeth. The whole poem reads as if - now bear with me here - you've directed a mini film. Your writing comes alive. The ending is brilliant: it reminds me of the final shot from the early 70s film 'The Last Picture Show'. I read your poem 'The Poet And The Kiss' and enjoyed that too. Cheers - Gary
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 8/17/2022 5:30:00 PM
What a thoughtful comment, Gary! My last line is reminiscent of your Clubland, I think. I enjoy your work many times over. The Poet's Wife especially, the feeling so deep it can be expressed only in metaphor. Of course, Last Picture Show is one of my favorites! Thank you so much! Elizabeth

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