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" Pardon me, if my soul has been p a i n t e d , with a lavender lake of solemnity, but, I'll f o r e v e r be a soulful siren, navigating midst neon s e a f o a m s , and sculpting an origami of honesty ~ like the archangels of heavenly faith " When the 'Swans of Sun' sing in a soft echo, behind silvery beams of oceanic clouds, I always become a winter's twilight, that misses those subtle hues of silky spring, as bittersweet stars tremble and fall upon my misty eyelids, like ruby jewels, scattered with jasmine scents and falling on glass-tulips. My story is more than speckles of glittery stardust, for, you shall hear the heartbeats of harp, breathing within me, and unfurling upon lotus layers of harmony, knitted by an eternal shine. Perhaps, ice crystals floating on puddles of sunrays, too search for a purpose, and compel life to chase that rusting light, escaping from crackles of lead skies. I wonder, is my sakura moon, a sea of pomegranate promises, dipped in maple scars? Perhaps, my muse is forbidding me, and my paper kingdom of sage and saffron, shall be soaked in a scarlet sanctuary of aching phrases ~ arching beyond aqua ashes of brokenness. There, my heart is crowned on a bleeding rose, as a 'spirit of rosemary runes', when its tears trace the luscious lips of petals, laced with secrets, unseen. I'll always narrate these tangible tales to red robins, describing how a dynasty of dreams kept burning inside my poetic flames, carving vermillion silhouettes across pastel pages, where healing will be sketched, like a rhymeless perfume and the immortal dove will rest upon a pearly crown of snow-white hibiscus.

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Date: 2/11/2024 5:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win in my contest with this magnificent write, Hiya. Really stunning imagery throughout your poem!
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Date: 2/9/2024 11:19:00 AM
I've been sitting here for a while trying to come up with a comment worthy of such an amazing poem, but I can't find any better words other than, wow! So intellectual and beautiful, with a wonderful flow to it. I love it, Hiya! Congrats on placement in the contest.
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Date: 1/31/2024 6:20:00 PM
The poem is on paper and creates a kingdom, but it is hard for me to be certain if that is what you mean. However, you create wonderful images of a variety of things within. Each little section explores a feeling and paints it in a beautiful pastel of colorful objects. Neat!!
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Date: 1/31/2024 1:38:00 PM
Lovely writing. I could see a glimpse of your spirit. Lots of light! <3
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Date: 1/31/2024 7:15:00 AM
Your words move with color and emotion,Hiya, enjoyed reading. Many blessings to you
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Date: 1/30/2024 12:05:00 AM
Very beautiful poetry, xoxo
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Date: 1/29/2024 11:39:00 PM
Dear Hiya, I have been overwhelmed, mesmerised, stunned to my very core by this monumental magnum opus. A stellar, star-studded cast of spell binding images in tandem with an awe-inspiring plot that never once veers or strays off topic. I’m so deeply indebted to you for your erudite slants on “Magenta.” They will be used as a launchpad for future endeavours Once again kind regards Howard
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Date: 1/29/2024 2:09:00 PM
I shouldn't choose a favorite stanza in this masterpiece (one of my all time favorites), but this... ...Perhaps, ice crystals floating on puddles of sunrays, too search for a purpose, and compel life to chase that rusting light, escaping from crackles of lead skies." Has meaning that keeps on giving.
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Jude Herrick
Date: 1/29/2024 2:09:00 PM
Not only a masterpiece, but an absolutely gorgeous one, like... ...red robins, describing how a dynasty of dreams kept burning inside my poetic flames, carving vermillion silhouettes across pastel pages, where healing will be sketched, like a rhymeless perfume and the immortal dove will rest upon a pearly crown of snow-white hibiscus." !!!
Date: 1/29/2024 10:01:00 AM
The title is intriguing me Hiya. Your color usage is uniquely awesome. I want to delve into the images of the siren, swans, doves and red robin origami, and the imagery weaved with profound emotions, given to us in chards. A wistfully delightful tapestry. Never stop your poetic muse, let her flow always! Blessings
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Date: 1/29/2024 1:46:00 AM
I always maintain that poetry is emotion as Wordsworth said. You have plenty of it. You have talent and originality. It is always a pleasure to read your poems. I have never seen a white flowering hibiscus. My sister would love it.
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Date: 1/28/2024 8:16:00 PM
Enjoyed this poem that speaks of paper but seems very solid. I felt honesty and privacy seemed to promise hope for the future. I loved the imagery.
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Date: 1/28/2024 7:47:00 PM
Let me take a deep breath....! How powerfully you have delineated the transformative power of art. "I'll always narrate these tangible tales to red robins, describing how a dynasty of dreams kept burning inside my poetic flames, carving vermillion silhouettes across pastel pages, where healing will be sketched," Indeed you have sculpted an origami of honesty. Your kingdom is not a paper kingdom, but a kingdom of solid steel and cement of talent and artistry that won't crumble or break down. All the Best Hiya!
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Date: 1/28/2024 3:44:00 PM
such evocative imagery and introspection in your lovely poem, Hiya. Your metaphors, too, are compelling and creative. I liked these lines for they spoke to the healing power of poetry (writing): my poetic flames, carving vermillion silhouettes across pastel pages, where healing will be sketched...Absolutely magnificent, Hiya. enjoy the week ahead, Sara
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Date: 1/28/2024 2:36:00 PM
"A dynasty of dreams burning inside your poetic flames carving vermillion silhouettes across pastel pages", I enjoyed your beautiful write Hiya, Well penned
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Date: 1/28/2024 11:48:00 AM
Well done! I love the stanzas about the paper kingdom and then the bleeding rose. I could feel it. Beautifully written :)
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Date: 1/28/2024 10:45:00 AM
I wonder if those red robins realize what a precious person, and poet you are. You did a nice job with this theme Hiya
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Date: 1/28/2024 10:41:00 AM
Hey Hiya so many familiar lines here.. I like how poem is a lyrical exploration of the human experience, weaving together themes of nature, introspection, and the transformative power of art. Through its evocative imagery and introspective tone, it invites readers to journey alongside the speaker as they navigate the complexities of existence and find solace in the transcendent beauty of the world. As always you use interesting adjectives and metaphors to create your imagery and impressions..
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Silent One
Date: 1/28/2024 10:42:00 AM
Its nice that it concludes with a sense of resolution and hope, as you find solace in storytelling and the healing power of poetry. The imagery of "vermillion silhouettes" and the "immortal dove" resting upon a crown of hibiscus leaves a lingering impression of beauty and resilience.
Date: 1/28/2024 10:10:00 AM
Aren't those white hibiscus beautiful in the summer. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/28/2024 9:51:00 AM
A symphony of ornate words adorning your theme in gems of vocabulary, Hiya. Your artwork, as always, shines in poetic prowess. Many like this: in a scarlet sanctuary of aching phrases ~ arching beyond aqua ashes of brokenness--and --how a dynasty of dreams kept burning inside my poetic flames, carving vermillion silhouettes... Awesome! A FAVE!!
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Date: 1/28/2024 9:16:00 AM
Ah this is so powerful and meaningful how you’ve expressed using metaphors, brilliant adjectives and excellent diction to articulate and create something that hits the soul in the most eloquent manner. I felt this poem and i can resonate as if i was reading me through your artistic lines! I especially loved “ rosemary runes” i have a poem with that title .. written sometime ago. “ sakura moon” “ jasmine scents” that made me smile. Our fave jasmine, jasmine doesnt like us though. And i love also
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Date: 1/28/2024 9:18:00 AM
“Dynasty of dreams “ “ rhymeless perfume” “ poetic flames” “ snow white hibiscus” that ending really did it! Top winner! Deserves all the accolades! How artistic is the way you think and express , truly remarkable and we speak the same language of metaphors and maybe is why this poem made me feel Breathless! A fave it is. Best wishes for the contest
Date: 1/28/2024 9:02:00 AM
Your poem is an exploration of the emotions and inner world, as well as their connection to nature and the universe, dear Hiya. The diction of the poem is rich and evocative, with vivid imagery and sensory details. Your use of devices such as metaphor "a soulful siren," "ice crystals floating on puddles of sunrays", simile "the archangels of heavenly faith", and personification "bittersweet stars tremble and fall" enhance the power of your poem. A fave from you
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