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22.07.2026
Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Paper Boat -


    On running water
    boat made by folding paper
    Cruise through history
    an unknown short adventure
               - even the Titanic sank
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Maverick Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 1:54 PM
And a plank of wood floats a long time Intresting got my attention Anne -Lise.)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 3:29 PM
have to fav this one, for it's just a delight to read.
George Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 8:24 PM
How as children, we used to enjoy sailing boats through streams. A poem arousing nostalgia.
DiMino Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 3:36 PM
For sure, size is no guarantee. Lovely, thoughtful write.
Kitchin Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 2:58 AM
Anne-Lise, a great nostalgic poem.
Onclaud Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 3:56 PM
your winsome images touches my heart since i have folded many paper boats during my youth...much delighted to read you today, anne!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 2:54 PM
Your "Paper Boat" is a fun read with a fun picture. What a great last line you have here. Love This One... Have a blessed/fun day writing away................
Cunningham Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 2:36 PM
Happy days Anne lise, must admit I never tried a boat always planes. Tom
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July 22, 2026 at 12:11 PM
Ah, the fragility of life caught in the voyage of a paper boat, Anne-Lise. Enjoyed this very much! Hugs and blessings! If this is for a contest, best wishes.
Gibbons Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 11:22 AM
Awwww Anne-Lise I love this write. I was a tomboy as a kid making boats n planes out paper... memories are wonderful well good ones. I love picture too hugssss <3
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