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Paper Airplanes

Paper Airplanes
I made paper airplanes decades ago One super creation I named Zoomo Once my Zoomo and I took off in flight Lift off was on the first stroke of midnight. I was the pilot and what fun we had If the folks had seen us they'd have gone mad Freedom's elating, no hullabaloo Able to do all things you wish to do. First stop just had to be a moon landing Though the surface was not fit for standing The moon said that he was made of soft cheese If we weren't careful we'd sink in with ease. So we took off to meet Venus the star She was so beauteous it was bizarre Her hair was a stunning shade of bright gold And many stories from the past she told. She told of her romance with Adonis A hunter to whom marriage was promised But by a wild pig he was killed outright Now she rules o'er love and beauty by night. Then we zoomed higher and higher up sky And heard angels singing as we flew by Zoomo said we were close to paradise So I then u-turned our speedy device. Realising soon day would be dawning And had to fly back home before morning We arrived safely and I got in bed Just as mother said "wake up sleepy head.”
*+*+* 14th August 2022 *+*
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Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 1:47 PM
this is filled with such imagination. I think you could be a winner!
Edmonds  Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 2:26 PM
Thank you Andrea, I appreciate that…. Belle
One Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 2:39 AM
A vivid imagination and intrinsic vocabulary can only produce great poems.. Just like you have done here..
Edmonds  Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 11:59 PM
Thank you so much Silent One, truly appreciated… Belle
Romios Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 4:33 PM
Best wishes, Belle, On this creative write! It’s so lovely…like you! Panagiota XXX
Edmonds  Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 11:58 PM
Thank you Pangie, you’re delightful and lovely too… Belle xxx
Fowler Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 10:44 AM
What a fun read Belle! So many great adventures with Zoomo :) Linda
Edmonds  Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 11:56 PM
Thank you Linda, it was fun to zoom to moon, in my dreams of course… Belle :-)
Y. Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 2:44 PM
WoW! Belle, Your imagination soared in this well written, fun, and clever write. It was such a good take on the contest theme. Excellent rhymes as well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful evening:-)Alexis
Edmonds  Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 11:52 PM
Thank you Alexis, it’s fun to indulge the muse in fantasy and adventure and the contest gave the ideal opportunity. All the best, Belle :-)
Wolf Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 7:31 PM
Day soon would be dawning // And morning would be yawning // ... Fawning over this one, Belle. Very nice! :) gw
Edmonds  Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 8:45 PM
Thank you Gershon, l love that you’re fawning. Belle :)
Baker Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 8:55 AM
Such a pleasant poem to read this mroning, Belle. A great entry for the contest my friend. Your imagination and creativity were enchanting. I've added this wonderful poem to my FAV's. Thanks for sharing it with us and good luck in the contest, Belle. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Edmonds  Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 12:52 PM
Bill, thank you for you those words, I’m thrilled that you found this poem worthy of a fave. Thank you also for the good luck wishes dear poet friend… Belle
Leffanta Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 11:33 AM
Enjoyed from first line to last! Winner for sure! Aloha!
Edmonds  Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 3:43 PM
Thank you Rico, really appreciated. Maloha, Belle
Kendrick Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 3:32 AM
Reads like a wild imagination and a very good contest entry to me. Way to go. I had fun flying through the lines. Thanks for your visit to my blog. I have added some updates . Sara
Edmonds  Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 3:41 PM
Hi Sara, I’m so pleased you enjoyed the plane journey. Hope things are getting better for your son, will go and read your blog updates… Belle
Cunningham Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 3:10 AM
What an amazing dream you had Belle, a shame we have to awake from those dreams. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Edmonds  Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 3:38 PM
Hi Tom, it is a shame we have to wake from our dreams and it’s usually when we get to the best of them that we do. Thank you… Belle
George Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 12:30 AM
When countries spend millions of dollars for a space travel, we poets do it as easy as we can and as often as we wish ! :) :) Really enjoyed your trip to the moon and to Venus ! Your reaching at the threshold of Paradise might have been really exciting !
Edmonds  Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 3:36 PM
Hi Valsa, it’s true us poets can go anywhere anytime and we do. I’m so pleased you enjoyed my fantasy dream trip, I enjoyed it too, the write that is… Belle
Proxenos Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 11:16 PM
What an amazing story and journey Belle, visitin other planet listening to their folklore tales and mom woke you up.then making a u turn by heaven , clever that I think would be out of bounds till one day - clever girl , you must have felt tired after such an amazing and long journey and adventurous journey when your mom woke you up Terrific imagination . Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Edmonds  Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 3:31 PM
Hi Jennifer, heaven may be a place of no return, best wait till it’s time to enter the pearly gates forever. The poem was fun to write and I am very grateful for your feedback. Thank you very much, Belle
Horsman Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 11:12 PM
Love the mystical miles, of your mind, Belle. The poetry, lovely.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 3:26 PM
Thank you so much Harry, words very gratefully received… Belle
Buhagiar Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 10:32 PM
I wish you a fun ride, dear Belle. You deserve it. Great imaginative poem.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 3:24 PM
It’s been another traumatic day Victor, I’m looking forward to the day hubby and me can enjoy some outings again. Thank you… Belle
Rose  Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 3:40 PM
Ah, I love your creative imagination and your skillful rendition of a well taken flight, Keep the child in you alive dear one, gl in the contest, :)
Edmonds  Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 3:56 PM
The child is staying alive inside, but the mirror tells a different story. Thank you Rose… Belle
Poet Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 3:29 PM
That is absolutely first-class poetry dear, Belle. Your great metaphors coupled with your wonderful diction shed more beauty on your poem. Blessings my friend and best wishes for a win.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 3:34 PM
Thank you my poetry friend your words have pleased me no end. Very grateful to you Sotto… Belle
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