Home » Poems » Paula Goldsmith » Paper Airplanes

Paper Airplanes

Lets take off to see what we can see, up above so high. Maybe we can even touch a cloud or two, as we fly up higher. The clouds look like cotton candy, let's grab a handful. Now higher up into the big blue sky, we are having so much fun. Did you see that bird looking at us, yes~guess we do not belong up here so high. We need to come in for a landing, I hear mom calling us for dinner. Guess our paper airplanes and fun are over for today, brother tomorrow is another flight day. Date Written: 8/14/2022

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/27/2022 1:10:00 AM

I wish we could grab a handful of the cotton candy clouds. Can you imagine how soft they must be?

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2022 8:03:00 AM

Thanks for your visit/note. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. Clouds of cotton candy I bet are very soft and sweet. A handful sounds great to me. Have a great/fun weekend............

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/20/2022 8:23:00 AM

Loved this Paula... Enjoyed reading... Paper airplanes give us so many childhood memories... Best wishes in the contest... Hugs... ~ Ani

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/20/2022 2:38:00 PM

Thanks for your visit/note and for your best wishes in the contest. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun paper airplane write. Have a great/fun weekend with hugs.............

Bill Baker

Date: 8/19/2022 7:59:00 AM

Nice light poem for this fine day. Thanks for sharing, Paula. Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/19/2022 10:12:00 AM

Thanks for your visit/note. Glad you enjoyed my fun paper airplane flight. Have a great/fun~ day/weekend.............

Juliet Ligon

Date: 8/15/2022 6:13:00 PM

I enjoyed how you made this about the perspective of a paper airplane. It was a fun ride.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2022 9:10:00 AM

Thanks for your visit/note. Glad you enjoyed my fun paper airplane flight. The ride was fun with a smooth landing. Great to be a kid again if only in a write. Have a great/fun day............................

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/15/2022 8:59:00 AM

Dear Paula, this is quite adventurous! Enjoyed your lovely poem describing a fun flight! Love ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2022 10:02:00 AM

Thanks for your visit/note. Glad you enjoyed my fun flight adventure write. I really enjoyed writing this one. Have a great day/week........................

Valsa George

Date: 8/15/2022 12:11:00 AM

Enjoyed your flight into the sky in your paper plane ! Landing can be a little risky ! Hold onto your seat with your seatbelt fastened tight ..... :) :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2022 10:00:00 AM

Thanks for your visit/note. Glad you enjoyed my fun flight write. Yes, landing one of these planes can be a very risky. All passengers need to hold real tight with their seat-belt fastened tight. Have a great day/week..............................

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/14/2022 3:35:00 PM

Your flying day free verse poem was enjoyable to read. Paula, that was so much fun. I really liked reading about your exciting paper aircraft flight. Best for a win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2022 9:54:00 AM

Thanks for your visit/note and for your best. Glad you enjoyed my fun flight write. Have a great day/week..............................

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/14/2022 3:19:00 PM

Hello Paula, I enjoyed the flight. When is the next flight? Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/15/2022 10:17:00 AM

Hello Paula, you are welcome. Yes I enjoyed your write. Pkay waiting for the next flight Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2022 9:52:00 AM

Thanks for your visit/note. Glad you enjoyed the flight and my write. The next flight will be soon. Have a great day/week with hugs.....................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/14/2022 12:36:00 PM

Enjoyed your flight day free verse poem Paula, what fun… Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2022 12:50:00 PM

Thanks for your visit/note. Were you in the plane next to us??? Hahaha. Glad you enjoyed my fun paper airplane trip/write. Have a great day/week ahead......................