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Poetic Form: Personification
Inspired: 2024 March 08
Image: Lovely Pansies by Esty

Lovely Pansies Packed Pansies FABRIC for Elizabeths Studio 475 Multi image 1

Chipmunks tease us after we bloom we're clueless as to why the words of the birds and bees loom we're small we don't deny Grow low, we'll be out of the way lowly we grew to be thought our colors a bit risqué butterflies shout, PANSIES!

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/18/2024 9:52:00 AM

Congratulation on your win. What a lovely write for the pretty "Pansy"s flower. I love this flower. What a colorful pretty picture. Have a wonderful day writing away.................

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/18/2024 11:04:00 AM

Paula, always happy reading your wonderful comments, you are a blessed heart, my friend, Aloha, William

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/17/2024 2:37:00 PM

William, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet poem!

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/17/2024 2:53:00 PM

Most kind of you, Tania, Aloha, William

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/9/2024 12:01:00 PM

They grow low but shine bright, who wouldn't want those vivid blooms decorating their garden?

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/9/2024 1:42:00 PM

After my reading, I had some of the pansies plucked and they placed them in a low Japanese ceramic salad bowl since I can't see the garden and the nursing assistant who is doing this will be taking some home with her. Thank you, Michelle, as I tend to seeing beauty in the best light too with my garden so close and yet so far. Aloha, William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/9/2024 7:19:00 AM

Those multicolor blooms are a splendorous treat for the eyes--a joy to read your poem, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/9/2024 8:40:00 AM

Most kind of you, Vijay, I appreciate your visiting comment, my friend. Aloha, William

Karen Jones

Date: 3/8/2024 5:13:00 PM

Delightful and fun upbeat and full of imagery! Great job!

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/8/2024 7:20:00 PM

I am as happy, Karen, as this submission had such an effect as it did, my friend. Aloha, William

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/8/2024 4:14:00 PM

an awesome and informative personification. Is this for the contest? If so, I'm sure your poem will do well. I liked the last two lines! enjoy your evening, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2024 1:34:00 PM

- They always get first place in my garden... so many beautiful colors to choose from - A lovely poem, William - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs