Notes About The Poem

Poetic Form: Personification
Inspired: 2024 March 08
Image: Lovely Pansies by Esty

Lovely Pansies Packed Pansies FABRIC for Elizabeths Studio 475 Multi image 1

Pansy

Chipmunks tease us after we bloom we're clueless as to why the words of the birds and bees loom we're small we don't deny Grow low, we'll be out of the way lowly we grew to be thought our colors a bit risqué butterflies shout, PANSIES!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 9:52 AM
Congratulation on your win. What a lovely write for the pretty "Pansy"s flower. I love this flower. What a colorful pretty picture. Have a wonderful day writing away.................
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 11:04 AM
Paula, always happy reading your wonderful comments, you are a blessed heart, my friend, Aloha, William
Kitchin Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 2:37 PM
William, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet poem!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 2:53 PM
Most kind of you, Tania, Aloha, William
Faulkner Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 12:01 PM
They grow low but shine bright, who wouldn't want those vivid blooms decorating their garden?
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 1:42 PM
After my reading, I had some of the pansies plucked and they placed them in a low Japanese ceramic salad bowl since I can't see the garden and the nursing assistant who is doing this will be taking some home with her. Thank you, Michelle, as I tend to seeing beauty in the best light too with my garden so close and yet so far. Aloha, William
Pandit Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 7:19 AM
Those multicolor blooms are a splendorous treat for the eyes--a joy to read your poem, William.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 8:40 AM
Most kind of you, Vijay, I appreciate your visiting comment, my friend. Aloha, William
Jones Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 5:13 PM
Delightful and fun upbeat and full of imagery! Great job!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 7:20 PM
I am as happy, Karen, as this submission had such an effect as it did, my friend. Aloha, William
Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 1:34 PM
- They always get first place in my garden... so many beautiful colors to choose from - A lovely poem, William - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace