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It was always the little things that caught her eye — the carnation crispness of a hello on a tired suit lapel ... A gentle smile exchanged for shoddy service given with a frown Yes, it was the exquisite details that mattered the most The small pearls ... wisdom gathered from the baptism of life Deep water hidden gems emerging to the surface Then patiently caught by her keen dove eyes She loved witnessing liquid joy, bathing her senses in fine granular things Pure white mixture ... sugar and salt, sweet enduring charity A delicate rose persevering in the harsh elements was a crystalline sight to savor ... saline petals of such earthy flavor She knew that small acts of kindness can leave an indelible mark on famine souls for a lifetime The grace of humanity falling from open twin windows Her daily confessional cries to the heavens was drenched in melting snowflakes of awe and wonder: She loved how the algae nourished the whales in the sea, how mustard seeds grew into great trees These tiny things warmed her spirit like a refreshing tropical breeze And her giant heart cherished how the small strokes of little things painted such a grand portrait of shared humanity A beautiful panoramic view She loved observing the simple subtleties of life ... generously always on display, revolving around people everyday Seasons changing in sacred increments She thanked God for serving this to us in small portions — our daily manna given by the omer

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Date: 2/11/2018 10:55:00 AM
Yes Freddy you knew what love was. I'm not sure if i am reading your poem correctly because it is a beautiful piece but there is sadness in it and i read this as your words were about someone you lost. If I'm wrong i am sorry. It's still a fave of mine either way!
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Date: 2/11/2018 10:41:00 AM
Wow.... She must be a beautiful soul. Lovely write.... Enjoyed it...
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Date: 2/10/2018 7:50:00 AM
Just beautiful Freddie, she sounds like such a special lady. One surely who has been put here to spread Joy. And the world could do with plenty of that right now. Your lines are amazing like always, your poetic vocabulary outstanding....Maria
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Date: 2/9/2018 12:33:00 PM
How many of his favours can you deny, a great poem about a lady you must know...
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Date: 2/9/2018 11:22:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem that brings about such gratitude, Freddie. Very well written :)
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