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Panning For Perfection

angel face decided her face needed more holes decided to infect perfection with imperfection. My eyes walked from face hole to face hole, each one trapping me for a second. Filling one hole at a time, with gentle fantasies dangling merrily from her lip ring- She ignites thoughts of impurites, her tiny hands whisper across the cash register, " you'll be here tomorrow buying things you don't need," filling holes in your life with my rings in your eyes". Panning for imperfection... holes

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Date: 9/29/2011 8:53:00 AM
I am very happy to have been able to read your poetry today Lemon. I do not have a lot of words to comment on it but I want you to know I did read it. Every poem as with every poet has a different meaning and I do not wish to misinterpert your poetry. I do love reading poetry here and I get inspiration from others poetry which enables me to write new poetry myself. There are lots of wonderful people who give great comments here and I hope they all read your poetry and comment. Love, Carol
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