Panic Cattack

Labored breaths echo throughout the bolted space.
A doom sensation overtakes the place of solace.
Her eyes scan for any exit. 
Light scrambles through a cracked door. 
A window glows, ajar.
Too far away for the taking, her body immobilizes.
She strives to breathe... even that threatens to cease.
Silent screams gasp for life,
as if trying to turn a door with breath.
A wave of wet beads seethe from her skin,
like lakes between boulders.
Her shoulders rise like hefty mountain weights
summoned to a stomach of scrambled sand.
In a kaleidoscopic instant, from the perceived exit,
enters a tuxedo hero, donning sporty socks,
flaunting a solid strut.
Up, he jumps upon her lap, like 
the reward of a clapping audience.
His constant fur coat would be a king's boast.
Like melted butter on toast, he spreads his warmth.
A reverberating purr becomes the mender of broken emotions.
Hyperventilation fades to mimic his oceanic vibes.

2/26/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Perrin Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 4:51 AM
This is such a clever idea! I can relate to this as can my daughter. Animals can do wonders for those struggling with anxiousness, depression and any other mental health problems. Congratulations on your fabulous write :-) x
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 3:58 PM
Loved seeing this one again because it's such a special poem. Congrats on the marathon winner list
Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 11:28 PM
Well done, Juliet. Congrats on your high placement.
Ligon Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 11:10 PM
Thanks, Line.
Toney Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 4:51 PM
Juliet, after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest has finally come to its end. Congratulations on placing 31st overall in the marathon! There is no provision to denote this in the Standard Contest other than Honorable Mention. Your participation in my contests is much appreciated. ~Mark
Ligon Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 11:10 PM
Thanks, Mark. What a great idea for a marathon contest! This must have been a lot of work to keep track of everyone's points.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 8:36 PM
Hello Juliet Ligon, so nice to meet you. So that is what a panic arrack is like? It would be my guess. Have a nice evening my friend.
Ligon Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 10:09 AM
Darlene, thanks for your comment. Nice to meet you, too.
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 6:55 PM
how cleverly written this is. Wow, a win in the Mile 21. A hearty congratulations to you, Juliet.
Ligon Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 10:08 AM
Thanks, Andrea.
Toney Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:19 PM
Juliet, my wife and I loved this poem! A Fav for sure :) Congratulations on your win on Mile 21 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
Ligon Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 11:04 AM
Thanks, Mark. I appreciate it.
Cornish Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:19 PM
Juliet, you had me from the start with this creative fun and mystery with a delightful surprise ending. Kudos on your placement.
Ligon Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 11:04 AM
Thanks, Craig.
Messina Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 7:07 PM
A splendid Cat-ching poem, Juliet. Awesome write...purrfect! Wish you the best...Charlie
Ligon Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 9:20 PM
Thanks, Charlie. I wrote this partly in my sleep last night, randomly remembering a childhood memory when I had a panic attack. The cat part of the write was an unrelated thought, but it cheered the poem up.
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