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Panic Cattack

Labored breaths echo throughout the bolted space. A doom sensation overtakes the place of solace. Her eyes scan for any exit. Light scrambles through a cracked door. A window glows, ajar. Too far away for the taking, her body immobilizes. She strives to breathe... even that threatens to cease. Silent screams gasp for life, as if trying to turn a door with breath. A wave of wet beads seethe from her skin, like lakes between boulders. Her shoulders rise like hefty mountain weights summoned to a stomach of scrambled sand. In a kaleidoscopic instant, from the perceived exit, enters a tuxedo hero, donning sporty socks, flaunting a solid strut. Up, he jumps upon her lap, like the reward of a clapping audience. His constant fur coat would be a king's boast. Like melted butter on toast, he spreads his warmth. A reverberating purr becomes the mender of broken emotions. Hyperventilation fades to mimic his oceanic vibes. 2/26/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/23/2019 4:51:00 AM
This is such a clever idea! I can relate to this as can my daughter. Animals can do wonders for those struggling with anxiousness, depression and any other mental health problems. Congratulations on your fabulous write :-) x
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Date: 4/21/2019 3:58:00 PM
Loved seeing this one again because it's such a special poem. Congrats on the marathon winner list
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Date: 4/20/2019 11:28:00 PM
Well done, Juliet. Congrats on your high placement.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 4/22/2019 11:10:00 PM
Thanks, Line.
Date: 4/20/2019 4:51:00 PM
Juliet, after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest has finally come to its end. Congratulations on placing 31st overall in the marathon! There is no provision to denote this in the Standard Contest other than Honorable Mention. Your participation in my contests is much appreciated. ~Mark
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 4/22/2019 11:10:00 PM
Thanks, Mark. What a great idea for a marathon contest! This must have been a lot of work to keep track of everyone's points.
Date: 3/30/2019 8:36:00 PM
Hello Juliet Ligon, so nice to meet you. So that is what a panic arrack is like? It would be my guess. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 4/1/2019 10:09:00 AM
Darlene, thanks for your comment. Nice to meet you, too.
Date: 3/7/2019 6:55:00 PM
how cleverly written this is. Wow, a win in the Mile 21. A hearty congratulations to you, Juliet.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 4/1/2019 10:08:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 3/3/2019 12:19:00 PM
Juliet, you had me from the start with this creative fun and mystery with a delightful surprise ending. Kudos on your placement.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/10/2019 11:04:00 AM
Thanks, Craig.
Date: 3/3/2019 12:19:00 PM
Juliet, my wife and I loved this poem! A Fav for sure :) Congratulations on your win on Mile 21 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/10/2019 11:04:00 AM
Thanks, Mark. I appreciate it.
Date: 2/26/2019 7:07:00 PM
A splendid Cat-ching poem, Juliet. Awesome write...purrfect! Wish you the best...Charlie
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 2/26/2019 9:20:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie. I wrote this partly in my sleep last night, randomly remembering a childhood memory when I had a panic attack. The cat part of the write was an unrelated thought, but it cheered the poem up.

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