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Panic, crying and screaming - sheer chaos ensues
Airport is on automatic security shut down
Nobody knew bombs were going to be detonated
Dead and injured litter the check in area
Everybody else runs for their life
Many are separated from their families
Only hoping and praying their loved ones are safe
No one knows where or when terrorists will strike 
I cannot comprehend why these atrocities happen
Ugly scenes we are seeing all too frequently across the world
Maybe one day in the future we have peace 

Pandemonium Contest
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/10/2016 8:16:00 AM
Congrats well written xxxx x
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Date: 8/10/2016 12:24:00 PM
Many thanks Wendy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/7/2016 8:46:00 PM
Congrats!!! Jan...what else is new lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/10/2016 12:24:00 PM
Many thanks ^WW^:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/7/2016 6:58:00 PM
Jan, I love this. It's so honest and flows really well. Congrats on your placement lady :)-luloo
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Date: 8/10/2016 12:24:00 PM
Thanks LuLoo its a scary world we live in:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/7/2016 6:49:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your fine placement in the 'pandemonium' Acrostic contest. What horrible circumstances we have to fear these days...sad. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/7/2016 6:54:00 PM
Thanks Sandra its a scary world we live in:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 8/7/2016 6:23:00 PM
Congrats, Jan. This one made my day after losing Caves!
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Date: 8/7/2016 6:55:00 PM
Way to go my friend - just the boost you needed today:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/4/2016 7:37:00 PM
Very Good Write. Sure to win .
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Date: 8/7/2016 6:55:00 PM
Thanks Anisha:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/4/2016 7:01:00 AM
good theme to pick and a message sent to boot good luck in the comp
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Date: 8/4/2016 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Stephen it was quite a difficult poem to write:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/4/2016 4:55:00 AM
This is a powerful poem x so sad but true your poem is fantastic x
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Date: 8/4/2016 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Wendy:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2016 11:46:00 PM
Yes, it is a sacry world we live due to these terrorist acts. A very well written acrostic, Jan. Best wishes for the contest. T.J
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Date: 8/4/2016 7:14:00 AM
It is a frightening world I agree TJ - but there is no answer as to why these people cause so much devastation to innocent lives:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2016 11:14:00 AM
It is one of those things in this world I can't comprehend either...excellent acrostic Jan
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Date: 8/3/2016 11:28:00 AM
Thanks Tim and sadly there is no answer on how to stop it happening:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2016 7:40:00 AM
This is a great poem about the blackness that some twisted humans do. The sad thing is often terrorists, do this by the name of their religion. There can never be a personal belief system that is "the truth" and condones this behavior. It is a dark corruption and does not belong in the collective consciousness of mankind. Well done.
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Date: 8/3/2016 7:50:00 AM
It's so heartbreaking to see these atrocities on the news Hillard and as you say these despicable acts are done in the name of religion:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2016 6:05:00 AM
Well done, jan. I see you took the challenge and you did exactly what he asked!! i am not seeing many poems that give suggestions for changing the situation though. Mine sure doesn't. Who can know how to change this evil??
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Date: 8/3/2016 7:00:00 AM
There isn't an answer to how to stop it Andrea and sadly it seems to be happening more and more frequently:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 8/3/2016 5:32:00 AM
It is horrible all he things that are going on in the world. You have described a chilling reality. Thanks for the visit and comment on my poem. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/3/2016 6:59:00 AM
I wasn't sure what to write on the theme Richard but sadly the news seems to be full of these atrocities so I went on this sad theme:-( thanks for the mail:-):-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/2/2016 11:57:00 PM
Nicely done, Jan, always follow your Muse. Viv x . ps- any news? SM
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Date: 8/3/2016 6:58:00 AM
No news will mail you soon:-):-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/2/2016 8:01:00 PM
Well said Jan, nice acrostic!
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Date: 8/3/2016 6:57:00 AM
Thanks Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/2/2016 7:39:00 PM
Well-done Jan, we all abhor these unwarranted terror strikes. Seren x
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Date: 8/3/2016 6:57:00 AM
I do worry about my son when he goes off on his travels but we can't let these things hold us back - then they have won even more:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/2/2016 7:36:00 PM
Well-done Jan, we all abhor these unwarranted terror strikes. Seren x
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Date: 8/3/2016 6:56:00 AM
Thanks Seren:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/2/2016 6:25:00 PM
You caught the image of P...
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Date: 8/2/2016 6:32:00 PM
Thanks Kim - I'm not sure what John is after for the contest but this is the way my muse wanted to go:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/2/2016 6:00:00 PM
Hi Jan, You have a good entry for the contest. I think you nailed it. Good luck in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/2/2016 6:07:00 PM
Thanks Alexis - such a scary world we live in - am so pleased our little Island is relatively safe ... for now that is:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/2/2016 5:40:00 PM
Very well done, like always. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/2/2016 5:45:00 PM
Many thanks Ronald:-) hugs Jan xx