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Panacea in Colorful Bottles

Written: September 9, 2025, for contest sponsored by: Rob Carmack Quote: "Lovers have heartaches that can't be cured by drugs or sleep, or games, but only by seeing their beloved" By Rumi ********** In the garland of ailments, we sip nepenthe, anodyne tinctures in elegant flasks— murmurous promises, beauteous masks, each fard a façade, each pill a palimpsest of pain rewritten in mellifluous ink. Pneumology sings in stertorous sighs, dyspnea dances under the aegis of relief. We stroll through the lanes of this lush haven. The breathtaking tablets gaze into bliss. What trendy medicine pills and supplies Supply human beings with many ways to support? I share on the matter of preventing slurs. The breakdown of moiety and the rise of risk. For even the most ductile clay may crumble in the quagmire of misuse. In the seraglio of spurious bliss, the simple and the iconoclast alike grasp the absurdity of escape. Acherontic powders, hexed and hissing, wafture through the penumbra of parties, where flapdoodle masquerades as rapture. fear grips the veins— a jussive urge, impetuous and egregious. We extemporize joy, inhale incarnadine dusk, and resile from reason with pertinacity. turbulent dawns, wan and woebegone, usher in ischemia’s kiss, a paucity of comeliness, a summary of sorrow. The lush becomes lurid, the sumptuous turns stygian. Even the most miraculous odyssey may cease in necrotic silence. Meliorism in time to come Yet still, amid the desiccation, a scintilla of optimism coruscates. The riparian soul, lithe and lit with Love, may manipulate a raw moiety of meaning. Through the shield of empathy, the one who heals may reclaim the palimpsest of self. Not all who inhale are lost— Some merely seek the empyrean through alternate doors. Let us not belittle the addict, the patient, the seeker. Each belongs to a consanguineous ilk of yearning, of zoetic ache. So let us offer not just palliation, but propinquity, not just summary judgment, but the sacred burnished balm of understanding. Let Love be the panacea, let compassion be the coruscation that flickers in the penumbra of every pharmacological night.
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Ashley Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 11:45 AM
Dear Lasaad, your might poetic pen has created a potent and poignant poem that is deeply moving, stirring both the depths of the heart and the heights of imagination with your creative, emotive and evocative imagery. The beauty of your empathy shines through the exquisite verse born of your wonderful intellect and poetic finesse. Congratulations for your success in Rob's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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September 26, 2025 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations, poet friend, on your high placement in this contest with an outstanding poem, replete with imageries, a masterly diction and a flowing rhythm. I like the understanding tone, coupled with love, you propose as conveyed in the in the penultimate and ultimate verses. Wishing you a fruitful coming weekend. Krish.
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September 22, 2025 at 3:22 PM
"Not all who inhale are lost— Some merely seek the empyrean through alternate doors." Love that and the message about judgment. One of the things I like about total depravity is that it includes everyone.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 5:16 PM
a masterpiece and powerful poem for the contest. Your imagery is outstanding and I deeply appreciate the last two verses, especially 'let love be the panacea' This poem deeply touched me. Best wishes with this entry in the contest, hugs from Texas, Sara
Rolland Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 10:25 AM
brilliant poetry exploring souls, the images are fantastic and inspiring great respect,, merci poète
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