Palloon?

Someone once told me that poetry is a balloon
make of that what you will
yes I will, baby
yes I shall
the world is not an oyster, and certainly not mine
it’s a balloon, you see
it makes a funny noise when it pops
something loud, something sudden
something you would laugh at,
if you weren’t a part of the ecosystem
you’d get it if you saw something pretty enough to be
blinding
a solar eclipse, a nuclear explosion
your own face in the mirror
unlikely enough to be
the enemy dying
of course, it depends on the side you were on
it’s human to have a nature
like this
I don’t blame you for the afterthought,
I blame you for everything else.

Good morning, hello everyone
my name is so and so, and when I grow up,
I want to be something I don’t know a thing about
yet, but
this is why I cried on my way out my mother’s body
this is something I know
perhaps the only thing
my name is this and this, dream this and this and-
I don’t want to make a funny noise when I pop
out
it’s a childish fantasy so you must entertain it 
at my age
I read stories about good children drifting away into
the stratosphere 
losing helium in gentle soft pillows
when
we laugh at each other and strike a pin into the rubber
of our brothers,
I steal their pillows 
and pump myself higher
and higher.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Charles Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 2:06 AM
"It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye" I think this quote rings true sometimes when we read one another’s poetry. We read it with our eyes but fail to see it with our hearts. Welcome back dear friend… “ )
Junaid Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 11:30 AM
This is such a warm welcome, thank you friend. I have really missed your insightful mind and voice. Keep shining.
Godwin Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 10:11 AM
I'm crying and don't care. You're here! This may be my fav Hiba-spilling. How that can be when I love them all is unclear. Maybe it's because I'm now emotional invested in you. Poem feels like your soul/heart both held the pen for this. When I think of you, I pray I didn't drop 'our ball' and don't recall because of my TBI. Just know you have meaning and matter to me, wouldn't hurt you for any reason & I want only light in your life. For contest? You/this poem, touch me. LOVE CayCay
Junaid Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 4:28 AM
Hiya, CayCay! I know I have not been online on this forum these days, but I really want you to know how much much I appreciate you and your words. Thank you so much for believing in me and being such a great friend. Be well, always. Love, Hiba.
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