Pale Shelter

(own title: Get What You give)

You need me
     I am well aware of that
You love me
     and in your own way, you show me that

but your way is not necessarily my way

    If you want the real me
           don't condescend to me
               and don't put down in me
                    the things that define me

Accept my flaws
         Don't try to tell me how I NEED to be
Accept me for who I am . . .
                        as I do you

Hold me in the night
          Don't make me ask for that
      If you see me crying. . . open your eyes
            and realize why-
 then hold me even tighter

If you do these things, 
             you'll then get back from me
    a love that is real.

Dec. 2, 2019 Inspired by John Hamilton's Pale Shelter Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kauffman Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 4:48 PM
Each of us is needed - each of us is necessary. We are created and equipped for this our time. I believe your poem encourages us to build up each other rather than try to change another person. Beautifully done - as always! Congratulations on your win, my friend. Blessings to you.
Hawley Avatar
December 12, 2019 at 7:51 PM
Right on!
Bayles Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 3:25 PM
Very nice poem, Andrea,
Johnson Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 3:01 PM
A button pushed and a soul not shushed. You spoke your truth without being uncouth. It is so true that love can wane, when it is given only in vain. <3 :) Well said Andrea. And evidently congrats are in order. So, :) Congrats. :) lol <3 :)
Neumann Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 5:39 AM
True story. Good luck in the contest ...
Neumann Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 5:39 AM
Just noticed you won. Congratulations.
Na Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 5:46 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Andrea
Hamilton Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 2:01 PM
Thanks Andrea for your fine entry in my contest! Congrats on a fine placement!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 4:20 AM
"your way is not necessarily my way" - this is such a TERRIFIC line, and so so so so needed to be said and OFTEN!
Y. Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 11:49 PM
Wow! Andrea I really enjoyed this write. It could be for anyone in a toxic relationship. We all want the one who professes " love" to really show authentic love. I can most definitely relate to this my friend. These could have been my "own" words at one point in my life. Excellent job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 11:30 AM
I am glad you got my meaning, Alexis.
Horsman Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:42 PM
on the pathway to true love...a recipe for the poem, or poet? love this Andrea..
Pandit Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 6:59 AM
Love begets love--sentiments well expressed, Andrea. All the best.
Mchattie Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Wise words indeed on the human condition. We often forget to listen when comforting a loved one. Well done my friend.
Bauer Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 6:31 PM
much wisdom in these words, andrea!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 4:00 PM
Nicely said, Andrea!
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