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Pale Leaves

clamps down on joints,
a cold brokenness —
how pale are leaves this fall?

10/20/2019
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November 13, 2019 at 2:57 PM

Congratulations :-) x

November 13, 2019 at 3:02 PM

Thank you, Elaine!

November 4, 2019 at 5:44 PM

I can feel the words you wrote invading my creaking, arthritic joints! LOL. ~ Abel, but not without (a) Cain

November 4, 2019 at 7:10 PM

Thanks, Gerahon! :)

Andrea Dietrich

November 1, 2019 at 7:59 PM

Congrats on your ZEN win, Kim!

November 1, 2019 at 8:44 PM

Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 1, 2019 at 2:18 PM

- Congratulations on your great "Zen" line - Well done, Kim :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

November 1, 2019 at 8:44 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)

Richard Lamoureux

November 1, 2019 at 8:47 AM

Thanks for adding your zen to my contest. ;0)

November 1, 2019 at 8:53 AM

Thank you, Richard!

October 21, 2019 at 4:08 PM

Pale enough to make a reader blush with pleasure :3 Nicely penned, Kim. Wishing you gold in the contest.

October 21, 2019 at 4:36 PM

Thank so much, Kurt!

October 21, 2019 at 3:24 PM

I don't know how many there are on the trees but mine are just about all pale. Well done my friend. Good luck and God Bless, JB

October 21, 2019 at 4:36 PM

God bless you too, Judy!

Michelle Faulkner

October 21, 2019 at 2:00 PM

a lovely write, so stirring, all the best for the contest, Kim!

October 21, 2019 at 2:05 PM

Thank you, Michelle!

October 21, 2019 at 8:01 AM

I know this feeling, it seems to be more prevalent each season that passes. I would say they are more pale than the year before. Nicely done Kim.

October 21, 2019 at 2:05 PM

Thank you, Chris. I was thinking about a friend of mine. The chill in the air has caused a lot of pain then she fell and broke her arm.

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