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Pale Leaves

clamps down on joints, a cold brokenness — how pale are leaves this fall? 10/20/2019 Get in touch with your Zen Poetry Contest Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux

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Elaine Perrin

Date: 11/13/2019 2:57:00 PM

Congratulations :-) x

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2019 3:02:00 PM

Thank you, Elaine!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/4/2019 5:44:00 PM

I can feel the words you wrote invading my creaking, arthritic joints! LOL. ~ Abel, but not without (a) Cain

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/4/2019 7:10:00 PM

Thanks, Gerahon! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2019 7:59:00 PM

Congrats on your ZEN win, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 8:44:00 PM

Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/1/2019 2:18:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great "Zen" line - Well done, Kim :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 8:44:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/1/2019 8:47:00 AM

Thanks for adding your zen to my contest. ;0)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 8:53:00 AM

Thank you, Richard!

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 10/21/2019 4:08:00 PM

Pale enough to make a reader blush with pleasure :3 Nicely penned, Kim. Wishing you gold in the contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2019 4:36:00 PM

Thank so much, Kurt!

Judy Ball

Date: 10/21/2019 3:24:00 PM

I don't know how many there are on the trees but mine are just about all pale. Well done my friend. Good luck and God Bless, JB

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2019 4:36:00 PM

God bless you too, Judy!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/21/2019 2:00:00 PM

a lovely write, so stirring, all the best for the contest, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2019 2:05:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle!

Chris Green

Date: 10/21/2019 8:01:00 AM

I know this feeling, it seems to be more prevalent each season that passes. I would say they are more pale than the year before. Nicely done Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2019 2:05:00 PM

Thank you, Chris. I was thinking about a friend of mine. The chill in the air has caused a lot of pain then she fell and broke her arm.