Pale

The distrust inflames me
A tainted image 
An angel fallen into the flames
How could he?
He stained my fantasy
Stabbed my trust
Maimed my dreams
And now all i have are ashes of what could have been
A dream killed too soon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 3:52 PM
Ann, Thank you for sharing your words. Love leaves quickly at times. And it has disapppointments. With patience, true love comes and grows. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Brown Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 9:05 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Ann. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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