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Pale

The distrust inflames me A tainted image An angel fallen into the flames How could he? He stained my fantasy Stabbed my trust Maimed my dreams And now all i have are ashes of what could have been A dream killed too soon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/1/2009 3:52:00 PM
Ann, Thank you for sharing your words. Love leaves quickly at times. And it has disapppointments. With patience, true love comes and grows. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 9/1/2009 9:05:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Ann. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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