Pair o' D's

    "The moon’s crescent is prescient"
         sigh I to my love
     "presaging this lovely night's evanescence" 
          
     "Your eloquence is senescent"
         she parodies
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 4:15 PM
creative use of the word 'senescent.' :-)
Maverick Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 7:06 AM
Well I'll give a tripple A here..I don't know whos Graded this before.? But they need Specs' LOL)))
Wolf Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 7:23 PM
Eh, you just don't care for 'Pair o' D's' is all. lol.
Baker Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 9:50 PM
Nice come back. I like it. BB
Wolf Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 7:25 PM
Won't you come back, Bill Baker? Won't you come back? ~ Lyrical Louie
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