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Painting Sandpipers and Gulls

I set up my easel in the shade of my beach umbrella. Wanting to paint by the morning light, I dabbed my colors onto the palette...sea foam green, azure blue, titanium white, and ochre.
 
                                    With wetted brush in hand,
                                    I looked out, ready to begin.
                                    But there upon the golden sand,
                                    Ran my tomboy daughter, Quin.

     An only child, Quin had long ago found ways to amuse herself. Since the age of three she'd insisted on brushing her own hair into a ponytail, Now, at seven, she hadn't yet gotten the hang of it, but fly-a-way hair becomes my little tomboy. I smiled when I realized how much like Quin I was as a child. I watched as she chased gulls and sandpipers, clapping her hands to keep them flying ahead of her running steps.  A child of nature, she sees beauty in everything. She stopped and shielded her eyes against the rising sun with her hands. She watched the sandpipers land further up the beach then walked back to me.

                                 "Mommy, do you think the birds
                                 are afraid of me when I give chase?"
                                 She waits to hear comforting words.
                                 I smile, looking at her worried face.

     "Quin, my darling, if you think they are afraid, find something else to do
that will not scare them away."  She picked up her blue denim bag and skipped along the shore looking for starfish and sand dollars. I painted the scene I wanted to capture, but Quin became the focal point of my canvas. I used the green, blue, white, and ochre to paint what nature provided, but I used a shade called peony for the cheeks of my tomboy daughter.

                                         sandpipers and gulls
                                  quin still loves making them fly
                                         with paint on canvas



Lin Lane ~ November 21st, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 16, 2015 at 9:10 PM
LIN :) CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN...... SKAT
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December 16, 2015 at 11:47 AM
*love* this Lin..And...I love HAIBUNS!!! Congrats :) *smiles*
Lane Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 11:51 AM
Thank you, Laura. It's become one of mine, too.
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November 22, 2015 at 10:32 AM
WOW!!!! I got so caught up in this that I even saw myself on the beach enjoying this moment too! Excellent if you ask me!!!
Lane Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 12:22 PM
To tell a poet that you became immersed in her/his write is high praise, and so I thank you very much, Sarita.
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