Notes About The Poem

Painting Autumn

October brings us panoramic scenes
Picassoesque impressionistic style
From reds to browns and earth tones in between
When nature paints those landscapes that beguile

The helpful sun provides hot yellow paint
Which bleeds and blends from mountains to the seas
There are no signs that nature shows restraint
As hues are scattered by the autumn breeze

Yet with her madness comes a masterpiece
The reason for spring's jealousy of green
Before her creativity has ceased
Her orange and black spills on Halloween

October means peace, love, and harmony
Get with your friends, enjoy fall's scenery


     By Daniel Turner     October 3 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 7, 2016 at 11:43 AM
Lush brushstrokes upon your page make for the most exquisite and entertaining poetry.
Turner Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 12:29 PM
Thank you, Paloma. Very flattering comments. I appreciate your kindness but I am without ego. However, like any old man, I do like to flirt:)
Duet Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 9:04 PM
"When nature paints those still-life's that beguile"...I love that line (even though they are not considered "still lifes"; they are called landscapes). I recently painted an autumn scene that I bet you would like. Hope you are well, Daniel.
Turner Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Thank you, Carole. I see I'm going to have to start letting you grade my paper before I submit it to the public:) You are a dear! I appreciate your kind comments and hope you are well.
Duet Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 9:08 PM
P,S., I meant to tell you: Congratulations on your win too. So very well deserved.
Daniel Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 12:05 AM
Very glad to see this beauty chosen as POTD:) congratulations, Daniel:) I like the first two lines of the third stanza the best:) I think I forgot to give you a 7 last time :)
Turner Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 7:52 AM
Thank you, Jo. You are very thoughtful. I appreciate your support and the high marks. It's always nice to share a smile with you:)
Wolf Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 10:38 PM
This is really really good, and you had me thinking with Picassoesque? Haha. Nice job mate /|\
Turner Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 7:51 AM
Thanks Rick. Glad you liked it.Picassoesque is a real word. I appreciate you reading and commenting.
Haight Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 8:25 PM
Another amazing and lovely Sonnet, Daniel! Congratulations on your poem being honored as Poem of the Day! Sandra
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Thank you, Mrs Sandra. It is indeed a humbling honor. I appreciate your kind comments. I am also envious of your talent:)
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October 5, 2016 at 4:23 PM
Congrats on POTD, Daniel, with this lovely fall poem. Agnes
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 5:40 PM
Thank you, Mrs Agnes. You are very kind. I appreciate your time and your support.
Smith Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Congrats young man.
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 1:48 PM
Thanks Tim. I appreciate it my friend.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 1:14 PM
I am so happy to see this beauty as POTD Daniel. You know I loved this poem so much I faved it! Congratulations my friend! 7 ; )
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 1:48 PM
Thank you so much Mrs Connie. I am glad you liked it. You are so sweet. Your support is very inspirational. I am humbled by your kindness.
Y. Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 1:00 PM
Hi Daniel, You captured the season well with this lovely Sonnet. The imagery is amazing. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 1:46 PM
Thank you, Alexis. I appreciate your high praise and kind comments. You are very kind:)
Cheyney Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 12:33 PM
A well-deserved potd.
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Thank you, Jolene. You are so kind. I appreciate your support.
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October 5, 2016 at 12:20 PM
No wonder this is POTD. Such a beautiful a painting, the features and colors so vivid. Congrats! :)
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 1:44 PM
Thank you, Sunita. I appreciate your thoughtful nature and your kind comments
Andresen Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 8:26 AM
- I am so happy that this was chosen to p.o.t.d. ... A wonderful poem - Congratulations, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 8:36 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. You are so sweet. You are also very beautiful:) I appreciate your kind comments and thank you for sharing your smile.
Darling Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 8:00 AM
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE!!!! Beautiful Daniel!! Congrats on poem of the day! 7 and adding to my favorites!
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 8:34 AM
Thank you, Chelcie. I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE your name. What could possibly be a more beautiful name than Chelcie Darling? I appreciate your kind comments and support.
Dalei Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 7:40 AM
Congratulation for POTD. Autumn is well painted dear friend. Enjoyed........//hugs
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 8:31 AM
Thank you, Manmath. I appreciate your kind comments and support:)
Kannan Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 7:14 AM
Congratulations on your well deseved POTD...
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 7:17 AM
Thank you Supraja:) You are sweet. Is that a picture of the moon? You have changed from a daisy to the moon. Now that is poetic!
Smith Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 7:01 AM
Back to congratulate you for POTD honors DT. You've deservedly been racking up the accolades here lately, way to go. Don't get the big head...
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 7:06 AM
Thank you, Charlie. I actually didn't think this poem was that good, to be honest with you. Really don't do egos! Were I to "get the big head" I would try to write a book. Not gonna happen! Poetry is fun! The best part is...the friends like you:)
Allison Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 3:38 AM
Wonderful imagery DT I love this time of year - congrats on POTD ... my previous comment seems to have disappeared into the ether:-( hugs jan xx7
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 6:55 AM
That's OK Jan, it happens to me all of the time. I appreciate you reading and commenting and for letting me know. Have a super day Jan:)
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 5:52 PM
Autumn is a beautiful season when the weather is just right to turn the leaves the right shades..Sometimes it is so dry here that the leaves just turn brown..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 6:53 AM
Yes, the summer heat takes it's toll on us. West Mountain is out my back door and it usually gets a lot of color, so I get lucky. Thank you for dropping in and checking on my vocabulary:) Hopefully you'll get a little rain and get some color this year. Thank you, Mrs Sara.
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October 4, 2016 at 3:05 PM
This is fantastic, Daniel. I love this beautiful month!
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 6:48 AM
Thank you Andrea. I appreciate your kind comments:) And yes, it is a beautiful month, it's the month my daughter was born:)
Rycroft Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 11:16 AM
What a wonderful poem it's so imaginative well done with this one x
Turner Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Thank you Mrs Wendy. I always look forward to your friendly visits. You are so sweet. I appreciate your support.
Kannan Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Beautifully penned...You did a great job...I love it... A big 7...
Turner Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Thank you Supraja. I'm glad you liked it. I really do appreciate your continued support. It is very inspirational for me.
Daniel Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 9:12 AM
I sure rue the fact that we don't get to see such beautiful scenery here in our place:( but your poem has fulfilled that thirst, thank you, Daniel:)
Turner Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Thank you, Jo. It seems at times, for those of us who do, we tend to take it for granted that everyone gets to enjoy the rich colors of our autumns. It's always my pleasure when you drop by. Thank you for sharing your smile.
Onclaud Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 9:10 AM
vivid picture of autumn, daniel.. you are setting a record as a sonneteer.. enjoyed your autumn view.. huggs
Turner Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Funny you should say that, nette. When I decided to learn how to write a sonnet, i thought it would be something I could do rather quickly. I suppose it's the perfectionist in me. I keep trying and trying to find the right words for the perfect sonnet. Thank you for your patient support:)
Gupta Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 7:25 AM
A rich blend of finest poetry and painting ... Very enchanting ...
Turner Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 8:05 AM
Thank you, Probir. You are so kind. I really appreciate your support. Is it autumn in Malta? Isn't that where you live? Do you get colors like this?
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 1:12 AM
This is a breathtaking sonnet Danny. The kind of imagery that makes you feel like you are right in the middle of the scenery. You are indeed an artist my friend. This is a very beautiful autumn poem! A fave for me! 7 ; )
Turner Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Thank you, Mrs Connie. Such kind comments:) I appreciate your time and support. I love the autumn colors. I live with a mountain, out my backdoor, covered with trees. I love when the clouds are laying down on top, the coolness and the quiet. That's when the mind travels!
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