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Painted Landscapes

Breezing trees heard the whispers of leaves- that used to be a lovely verdant green. With summer nearly gone, each one perceives it's time to stage their awesome autumn scene. Their goodbye gift before the frost begins- when limbs turn bare of their majestic life- is turning red, gold, orange, leafy skins to views of painted landscapes, rich and rife. We marvel at the beauty of fall's glow; yet soon, those vivid leaves will fall and die to feed the soil beneath cold winter's snow- as silently, they bid their last goodbye. When trees awake again with spring's rebirth- new leaves again will paint the verdant earth. April 16, 2020 ~2nd Place~ Contest: Poetic Lines From A Poetry Soup Poet Sponsor: Silent One Judged: 05/03/2020 Line Used: 'Breezing trees heard the whispers of leaves' - From the poem, "The Last Goodbye," by Vijay Pandid

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Date: 5/5/2020 11:05:00 PM
Happy Cinco de Mayo and sincere congratulations for your HM in Brian's contest, Sandra - keep up the great work! I hope you are staying safe and sound, My Friend - blessings! :o) <3
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Date: 5/5/2020 1:35:00 PM
A Sonnet of rhymes, rhythm and elegance. Congratulations, Sandra, for your wonderful win with this natural beauty. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/3/2020 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest, Sandra, great use of Vijay s one line same as i. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/3/2020 6:30:00 AM
A well constructed sonnet that rhymes and flows so well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 4/18/2020 10:44:00 AM
An elegantly penned sonnet - very appealing, Sandra.
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