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Paint With Fire

Painted ponies blaze Across the steppe-land maze I bask in the sun's dying rays Newborn hopes had begun to raise Timid dreams of brighter days Wagon wheels break the Western skies Intensive care for invasive lies Truth hidden soon dies Hurling poker chips, roll your snake eyes Finding solace in the campfire Indigeous hate we all inspire Railways stealing for hire Engulfing the plains with our funeral pyre -------- I'm still on a Western kick it seems. Oops. I wrote this thinking of Andrea Dietrich's contest, but I'm pretty sure this isn't the right tone. Ah my muse. Sorry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/18/2014 10:00:00 PM
Yehaw, great acrostic girl, this was unique and fun to read, grats on your win :)
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Date: 7/18/2014 2:34:00 PM
A lovely, win..PD
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Date: 7/18/2014 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations. I am glad you chose the western theme to paint with fire your poetic imagery.
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Date: 7/18/2014 8:56:00 AM
I love the western theme, your pen was indeed on fire. Congrats.
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Date: 7/18/2014 6:58:00 AM
Love the western take on this, my friend! Congrats on a great win! Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/18/2014 1:02:00 AM
Very lovely write indeed Rivenbark ! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 7/17/2014 11:42:00 PM
for me this kind of captured the spirit of manifest Destiny and how we "screwed over" the natives. the images were pretty cool and I enjoyed this unique entry in my contest. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 7/11/2014 12:28:00 PM
The spirit in this poem gives a multitude of vibrant visions Riverbank, I'm feasting on the diverse images, and the diverse meanings for me. Makes me think of how everything sacred seems destin to be violated, and reborn as a monster of beauty. This is very deep poetry Riverbank. J.A.B.
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Date: 7/6/2014 4:21:00 AM
Everyone loves a good western... You need to take that muse to the saloon for a shot of whiskey
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Date: 7/6/2014 12:20:00 AM
I loved this one!Makes me wanna be a cowboy and travel back in time!
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